Remembering My Godfather
A remembrance.2 total reviews
Comment from Beejay
Your Godfather must have been an amazing person to have influenced you4 life so deeply. I bet he would be so proud to read your work and know how much you love and miss him.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Your Godfather must have been an amazing person to have influenced you4 life so deeply. I bet he would be so proud to read your work and know how much you love and miss him.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thank you! Yes, I agree with you! He would be proud. A wonderful person.
Comment from lancellot
It sounds like you enjoyed hanging around with your godfather, and he was or you did decent things. I think that is part of the point you wanted to emphasize here. I would recommend that you go a little deeper. You have up to 1000 words. That may improve your connecting with the readers.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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It sounds like you enjoyed hanging around with your godfather, and he was or you did decent things. I think that is part of the point you wanted to emphasize here. I would recommend that you go a little deeper. You have up to 1000 words. That may improve your connecting with the readers.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thank you!
