Friendship Undone
Come undone2 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good reminder that talking through things can keep friendships together. For forgiveness makes it stronger. Losing a friendship from misunderstanding is a horrible thing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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This is a good reminder that talking through things can keep friendships together. For forgiveness makes it stronger. Losing a friendship from misunderstanding is a horrible thing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thank you!
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No problem.
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-The syllable count is good.
-A good topic with
good descriptive lines.
-I like the contrast in line one,
and the description of ignorance.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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-Very nice artwork.
-The syllable count is good.
-A good topic with
good descriptive lines.
-I like the contrast in line one,
and the description of ignorance.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Thank you! I fixed it. Thanks for your help!
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You are welcome. I changed the review for you. I am glad it was a simple change.
