Dawn Comes
Dawn comes quietly before the burst of day.4 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
A very good Haiku, my fellow writer. I really like your graphic, and your words tell a good story from beginning to end. Good
luck in the contest! Keep writing!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
A very good Haiku, my fellow writer. I really like your graphic, and your words tell a good story from beginning to end. Good
luck in the contest! Keep writing!
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 nature 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt entry. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 nature 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt entry. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.
Comment from RodG
The picture perfectly matches your 5-7-5 poem.
Your scene is easy to visualize, especially the colors of early dawn. You also capture the MOOD of daybreak.
Rod
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
The picture perfectly matches your 5-7-5 poem.
Your scene is easy to visualize, especially the colors of early dawn. You also capture the MOOD of daybreak.
Rod
Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Thank you, sir. Appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Beejay
Such a beautiful dawn picture...the colours are exquisite
It's been a long time since I've seen a dawn as precious as that. I think you have a good entry with this piece, good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
Such a beautiful dawn picture...the colours are exquisite
It's been a long time since I've seen a dawn as precious as that. I think you have a good entry with this piece, good luck.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the read and the feedback. Much appreciated.