Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

A well structured, worded, and themed free verse poem. The colorful presentation with fine artwork enhances the idea
It follows the contest requirements
There are no specific notes in the Author's space to go on so the following suggestion is offered with a desire to assist:
Can you now *Sea* (3occurrences)
Is this intentional? It is unclear to the reviewer.
Is the author playing on words? (? "see")
Clarity in the Author's notes space would prove edifying
Review guidelines allow 4 stars or less where work is needed
If this rating is pertinent
the piece can attain a higher rating after adjustments have been made
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2021

Of course as you begin to learn my style you know I play with words to suit the purpose in theme.
Spoctologically Spoctological Logically Logical.
And of course I never review less than five stars unless of course there's terrible grammar and a person's new to writing.
My own personal choice.
You also have the personal choice of blocking anybody that's reviewing your work not satisfactory according to your standards.
Example: My other reviewers gave it all fives one gave it a six cuz they love the ocean.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Terry Overton

Excellent

Living on the coast, poems about the sea always draw me in. I enjoyed your word selection and rhyming. Your picture is a great one for this poem. Best to you :)

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021

Thanks Terry.
I truly enjoy writing about the ocean.
And, it's a very comfortable and peaceful place.
I love to go out at least a hundred yards in the Godly fluid, on float on my back.
Yes, just feel the ocean underneath.
Doctor Ricky 1024