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Relaxation Day My Way

Finally, a subject I could have a PhD in!

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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So sorry that your wife bothers you that much that you must spend the day relaxing by yourself. We are retired, too, but what is that comment about growing old together.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021
    Of course, I do write in jest, and I have suffered so long, 44 years, that I am used to it. My wife is typical of always coming up with new things we must get done. Things that are perfectly fine, must be changed. My dogs make no such demands. My golfing buddies really don't care what I do other than hit the ball and pay up when I lose. Growing old together? Indeed! She was so much younger when I married her. But, I digress...
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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Great poem. Nothing is more relaxing than seeing some arduous reading and realizing you never have to attack it. The pretext presented is certainly one to consider. The wording is commonplace and conversational. The humor is obvious The poem flows well.

I have no suggestions. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    Thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked my poem and found the humor in it.
Comment from Bonnie Seach
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Yes, the poem is amusing.
Some say men hang onto their jobs for as long as possible to keep out the wife's way.
The poem is contest compliant
Thank you for sharing
Best wishes for the contest

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    As you mentioned, I have known men who continue to work to avoid their wives. At our golf club, we often say, "if my wife would just divorce me, I could quit playing golf." Much the same. But, after 44 years, I've gotten used to it...
reply by Bonnie Seach on 08-Aug-2021
    🤣😂👌Divorce relieves a retired man from the burden of marriage, maybe... But from the burden of playing golf, I find hard to believe ⛳😜😂I think the 29 th hole is too addictive 🤗
Comment from equestrik
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This sounds lovely-I have a bout a year and a half before I retire and I am looking forward to it for sure! Sounds to me like you have it pretty well figured out!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2021


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
    Figured out? Maybe not. We bought a motorhome and so I have solved having too much money in the bank. And, the challenges of fixing things is work itself. However, spending September and October in Maine, New Hampshire and Vermont sooths the wounds... Thanks for letting me share writing with you.