Voice in the Ocean
Four Line Poem13 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Now that is expressive poetry
Love how you describe those ample curves, loops in cursive format as waves.
Peaks to plunge is beautiful said.
Sorry I'm struggling to find the right words to describe the awesomeness of this poem .. I hope giving you a six star review does the job.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Now that is expressive poetry
Love how you describe those ample curves, loops in cursive format as waves.
Peaks to plunge is beautiful said.
Sorry I'm struggling to find the right words to describe the awesomeness of this poem .. I hope giving you a six star review does the job.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you!! I LOVE that you noticed this...
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of alliteration and assonance in your brief four-line poem! I especially liked the metaphor " surf cursive waves " for the wavy handwriting. Congrats on your third place finish!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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Great use of alliteration and assonance in your brief four-line poem! I especially liked the metaphor " surf cursive waves " for the wavy handwriting. Congrats on your third place finish!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much!!! That's awesome!
Comment from kmoss
Six stars for only four lines, but this poem is absolutely beautiful.
Letters drawn give voice to thoughts is a wonderful line.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Six stars for only four lines, but this poem is absolutely beautiful.
Letters drawn give voice to thoughts is a wonderful line.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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SIX STARS!!
You are the best. Thank you so much :)
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No, you are the best! :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This short poem intertwines the movement of thoughts from your muse to your ming with the rise and fall of actual writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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This short poem intertwines the movement of thoughts from your muse to your ming with the rise and fall of actual writing.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much :) so much for reading. You are awesome and a Great writer
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Don't mention it. And thanks for your compliment.
Joan
Comment from Ric Myworld
A "Voice in the ocean," sorta sounds like gurgles to me, but when you put pen to paper, or fingers to keyboard, you make the dips and dives, highs and lows scribe out poetry. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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A "Voice in the ocean," sorta sounds like gurgles to me, but when you put pen to paper, or fingers to keyboard, you make the dips and dives, highs and lows scribe out poetry. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Haha. Thank YOU. Seriously man thank you.
Comment from rama devi
I always love reading your work aloud, with the fantastic phonics, especially P and S sounds plus T, E and U in this write. Your letters give eloquent voice to thoughts. Love the near-consonance of F and V in surf cursive waves - like sweet silk on the tongue. Peaks to plunge speaks volumes with brevity.
Skillful, original, impacting and artistic write. Great flow and AHA effect too.
Bravo.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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I always love reading your work aloud, with the fantastic phonics, especially P and S sounds plus T, E and U in this write. Your letters give eloquent voice to thoughts. Love the near-consonance of F and V in surf cursive waves - like sweet silk on the tongue. Peaks to plunge speaks volumes with brevity.
Skillful, original, impacting and artistic write. Great flow and AHA effect too.
Bravo.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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NO WAY. Thank you so so much!! Sixes from You are HUGE to me. Thank you. And when you get the Sound of it. Really Rama thank you.
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YAY! Thrilled you're thrilled!
Comment from Pantygynt
I found the apparent oxymoron bringing this four liner to a close to be most intriguing. 'Peaks to plunge' creates several conflicting images, and that is before we relate it to the earlier part of the poem. This one gets my final six of the week.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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I found the apparent oxymoron bringing this four liner to a close to be most intriguing. 'Peaks to plunge' creates several conflicting images, and that is before we relate it to the earlier part of the poem. This one gets my final six of the week.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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WOW man. Wow. I just told Rama this too. But Sixes from you are HUGE to me. Seriously both of you are such Insanely talented people, your opinion especially means a lot to me man. Thank you so much, truly.
Comment from karenina
Beauty fully presented! It's just saying exactly like that! "surf cursive waves.". Wish I'd thought of that! So! This feels like a winner Gregory!!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Beauty fully presented! It's just saying exactly like that! "surf cursive waves.". Wish I'd thought of that! So! This feels like a winner Gregory!!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Thank you Karenina you are AWESOME!! Thank you :)
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I think you are...so there!
Karenina
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;) thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved your well chosen words here to describe your muse pouring through your pen and inking the page with joyous magic, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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I loved your well chosen words here to describe your muse pouring through your pen and inking the page with joyous magic, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Aw thank you Dolly :)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant--first of all, you nailed the title--it enhanced the imagery of this short poem rather than repeating a line of poem like many do --what a waste of free space. The poem itself is ingenious.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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Brilliant--first of all, you nailed the title--it enhanced the imagery of this short poem rather than repeating a line of poem like many do --what a waste of free space. The poem itself is ingenious.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2021
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THANK YOU!! I love YOUR reviews! I just told Rama and Pantygynt that. You guys are seriously so talented, which is why your opinion means so much. Plus I like you a lot ;)
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Right back at you. You flatter me--Reviewer Rama is in a class by herself. (Funny, she only once reviewed mine and I don't recall seeing any of her work). As for Panygynt--he's a master writer (and poet)--I read most of his chapters, but he's rarely read my work.
