"The Book of Death"
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Comment from Terry Overton
The writing flows pretty well but since I am new to this story, I had a little trouble catching up to the plot! If the rest of the book is the same quality, it will be a good one. Best to you.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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The writing flows pretty well but since I am new to this story, I had a little trouble catching up to the plot! If the rest of the book is the same quality, it will be a good one. Best to you.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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There's only three parts to this and it's not really a book. Yes, it's just a short story as I noted.
I rewrote the first part because I wrote it in a notebook and couldn't find it. So, the thing's completed now.
(If you want to check it again) and thanks for reviewing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from AliMom
I enjoyed the follow-up to part 1. It brings us deeper into your psyche and involves us in your dreamscape. Happily, you've survived your desperation but clearly, your poem says it's not over. A small reprieve perhaps. I like the fluidity of both poems.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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I enjoyed the follow-up to part 1. It brings us deeper into your psyche and involves us in your dreamscape. Happily, you've survived your desperation but clearly, your poem says it's not over. A small reprieve perhaps. I like the fluidity of both poems.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2021
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I just released a conclusion I hope you enjoy it Mom?
Doctor Ricky