"The Book of Death"
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Comment from Lulube
I like this style you've written in, it is not so confusing for me. I followed, all the while asking myself, "did he just say a noose?" I hope this is regarding your long ago past and not a future endeavor? but I guess as long as you are posting, I don't have to worry about this being the start of a confession. Glad you still carry your humor with you. take care
lulube
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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I like this style you've written in, it is not so confusing for me. I followed, all the while asking myself, "did he just say a noose?" I hope this is regarding your long ago past and not a future endeavor? but I guess as long as you are posting, I don't have to worry about this being the start of a confession. Glad you still carry your humor with you. take care
lulube
Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2021
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No rope.
(But it was considered but not an option)
Instead?
A seven inch Serated steak knife into the Heart
Thank for sharing in your review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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you scare me
lulube
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My actual suicide attempt was December 1st 2006 for the 7-in rated steak Knife into my chest.
Thanks.
Ricky
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you told me before and I still don't know how you survived. pretty good confirmation that you are still to be here.
lulube
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Well I actually thought about hanging but I did believe would look appropriate to my children finding my corpse hanging from the rafters in my bedroom.
I didn't plan to basically eliminate myself the way I tried even though I slept with a butcher knife for 3 months.
I lost my mind that day.
It's all presented in my book entitled "Suicidal Intentions!"
And, with the poem Entitled,
"Triple Suicide Dance!"
24.
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when I was 15 yrs. I was in Japan expo Osaka, 1970,, in a drum/majorette band, performing there for BC. I had some kind of an emotional crisis and I cut my wrist, the wrong way, but neverthelles, I wanted to end it all. I know how that feels. but as we grow older, we can push down those impulsive escapes. I wish you well, Ricky.
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when I was 15 yrs. I was in Japan expo Osaka, 1970,, in a drum/majorette band, performing there for BC. I had some kind of an emotional crisis and I cut my wrist, the wrong way, but neverthelles, I wanted to end it all. I know how that feels. but as we grow older, we can push down those impulsive escapes. I wish you well, Ricky.
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Holy comoly what a heavy poem if this is a true statement i am glad the rope could not hold All the Love you have inside that is why you did not die to spread the word of love and strength this is the message that that God has made that that when we have come to we can not take anymore God protects us that is For Sure ! Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem I hope it has helped you to grow !
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Holy comoly what a heavy poem if this is a true statement i am glad the rope could not hold All the Love you have inside that is why you did not die to spread the word of love and strength this is the message that that God has made that that when we have come to we can not take anymore God protects us that is For Sure ! Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem I hope it has helped you to grow !
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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I will continue with my attempted suicide little bit later today!
But will I be successful in what will be my second means?
And thanks for reviewing.
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I should expect not since you are telling the story ! And Thankfully not :)
Comment from AliMom
Yo Ricky, though it is dark and dangerous, I like this poem a lot. There's a lot of inner turmoil and tension that comes through your words. The picture is a perfect accompaniment to the poem. I see hope in it. I see despair offset by hope of deliverance. An understanding of the futility of it all mingled with humor and (dare I say it?) life! It's buried. You have to dig for it. But there is a struggle for life (not just the physical).
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Yo Ricky, though it is dark and dangerous, I like this poem a lot. There's a lot of inner turmoil and tension that comes through your words. The picture is a perfect accompaniment to the poem. I see hope in it. I see despair offset by hope of deliverance. An understanding of the futility of it all mingled with humor and (dare I say it?) life! It's buried. You have to dig for it. But there is a struggle for life (not just the physical).
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Can somebody so sad inside?
Somebody who has lost their entire world?
Possibly survive at the hands of somebody who's always waiting?
Satan?
And thanks for your time and review!
Doctor Ricky 1024