Trees
A short Ode to trees in season33 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Nomi,
I like the feelings you elicit with all four seasons.
I see those beautiful trees changing colors. Autumn is my favorite season. Spring too. I don't like Winter either, Nomi.as desolation sets in!
An excellent write!
Good luck with all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Nomi,
I like the feelings you elicit with all four seasons.
I see those beautiful trees changing colors. Autumn is my favorite season. Spring too. I don't like Winter either, Nomi.as desolation sets in!
An excellent write!
Good luck with all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you Cindy. I totally appreciate the support you have shown to me for some time now.
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I enjoy your poems, Nomi!
You have a good ear when I comment too. Lol Thank you for listening.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment from Beejay
Trees, I believe, can undoubtedly have an effect on people, they certainly do me.
I love it in Spring when the greenery starts to sprout again and then when the branches are in full foliage, it fills me with hope and anticipation. I m not sure of what..lol..but the condition/ state / development of trees is something I always enjoy .
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Trees, I believe, can undoubtedly have an effect on people, they certainly do me.
I love it in Spring when the greenery starts to sprout again and then when the branches are in full foliage, it fills me with hope and anticipation. I m not sure of what..lol..but the condition/ state / development of trees is something I always enjoy .
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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I am told that trees are the literal lungs of the planet. It is because of tress that we have clean air to breathe. So, when tress burn or are cut down in excess, the planet is being deprived of the air we need to survive.
Comment from duaneculbertson
Nomi,
Beautiful in its simplicity, I love what you have done with your poem. Trees are indeed a great metric for our lives. It always amazes me to think what they may have seen - the ones going back to the War for American Independence. I love how they have rings to mark each year too. Trees promote peace and wisdom - a great topic for poetry.
A lovely picture you have chosen as well.
Best,
Dave
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Nomi,
Beautiful in its simplicity, I love what you have done with your poem. Trees are indeed a great metric for our lives. It always amazes me to think what they may have seen - the ones going back to the War for American Independence. I love how they have rings to mark each year too. Trees promote peace and wisdom - a great topic for poetry.
A lovely picture you have chosen as well.
Best,
Dave
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you Duane. I have been told that trees are crucial to our supply of breathable air. If that is true when a tree is destroyed, we are being deprived of air to breath.
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Yeah, that is true. We all owe much to the trees. From an evolutionary standpoint, oxygen was originally toxic. Early cells adapted through molecular evolution to metabolize carbohydrates by 'burning" them with oxygen. This is of course cellular respiration, which is equivalent to burning a piece of paper in a fire, except the energy is released slowly using about three or four dozen smaller steps. Trees take in carbon dioxide and split water to build carbohydrates, releasing oxygen in the process, the oxygen we need for life.
I am not sure why I went on this tangent. Anyway, yes, we need trees and trees are beautiful.
Best,
Dave
Comment from l.raven
Hi Nolan, I love the trees my sweet friend...
In the Summer when they stand strong...and full...
In the Fall when their leaves turn a beautiful color rusty...
In the Winter when the snow makes them a winter wonderland...
In the Spring blooming with all their majestic beauty...
every season so much to admire...I love your description
of the trees beauty through the seasons...soooo very well written...and I love your poem sweet guy...picture...stunning...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Hi Nolan, I love the trees my sweet friend...
In the Summer when they stand strong...and full...
In the Fall when their leaves turn a beautiful color rusty...
In the Winter when the snow makes them a winter wonderland...
In the Spring blooming with all their majestic beauty...
every season so much to admire...I love your description
of the trees beauty through the seasons...soooo very well written...and I love your poem sweet guy...picture...stunning...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, sweet lady. I simply adore your expressions. You re a treasure that I place much value upon. Please never change.
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your are always so welcome kind Sir...
and I'll make a deal with you...you never
so being the sweetheart you are...and I won't change...Deal???...love to ya...Linda xxoo
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your are always so welcome kind Sir...
and I'll make a deal with you...you never
so being the sweetheart you are...and I won't change...Deal???...love to ya...Linda xxoo
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Done.
Comment from mermaids
I like how you describe the trees in each season. There are emotions in your words as seen in the winter season which the trees are bare. Excellent short poem that creates a picture of nature and shows the trees as live characters.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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I like how you describe the trees in each season. There are emotions in your words as seen in the winter season which the trees are bare. Excellent short poem that creates a picture of nature and shows the trees as live characters.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate you.
Comment from June Sargent
Lovely sentiments that express appreciation for the beauty and allure of trees in each season. I, too, struggle to remember the halcyon days of summer - especially now that we are in the autumn of our lives. Lol But we still have much to look forward to...
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Lovely sentiments that express appreciation for the beauty and allure of trees in each season. I, too, struggle to remember the halcyon days of summer - especially now that we are in the autumn of our lives. Lol But we still have much to look forward to...
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Absolutely. Most especially lovely poems like the one that inspired my efforts.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, I love trees! They have energy and soul of their own. Great personalization of trees, describing their emotions at different times of year. I am also very sad in winter, looking at bold trees.
Amazing visuals, imagery and presentation.
On the aside note, you have to fix the first line of the Author notes. You have:
"Inspired by Mrs. KTĂ¢??s poem: AutumnĂ¢??s Captivating Song".
The "evil eddie" (FS editor, lol) acquired a few strange symbols, you may want to take care of it.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Oh, I love trees! They have energy and soul of their own. Great personalization of trees, describing their emotions at different times of year. I am also very sad in winter, looking at bold trees.
Amazing visuals, imagery and presentation.
On the aside note, you have to fix the first line of the Author notes. You have:
"Inspired by Mrs. KTĂ¢??s poem: AutumnĂ¢??s Captivating Song".
The "evil eddie" (FS editor, lol) acquired a few strange symbols, you may want to take care of it.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you. I got bitten once again.
Comment from royowen
For many years now I've thought of autumn as being nature's presentation as part of the gospel, "the glory of death" with all the wonderful colours associated with it. Just a transition, beautifully written Bro, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Typo : Trees whisper and (mummer) murmur?
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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For many years now I've thought of autumn as being nature's presentation as part of the gospel, "the glory of death" with all the wonderful colours associated with it. Just a transition, beautifully written Bro, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Typo : Trees whisper and (mummer) murmur?
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thanks for the catch brother, I will take care of it right away.
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Spring is a beautiful time with all God's creation rebirthing. (I'm not sure that's a word, but it is now, LOL)
My favorite time of year is autumn with all the rich colors and a time for taking stock of life.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Spring is a beautiful time with all God's creation rebirthing. (I'm not sure that's a word, but it is now, LOL)
My favorite time of year is autumn with all the rich colors and a time for taking stock of life.
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Than you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love this. I love the internal rhymes as well as the external ones. You speak of the seasons as though you knew them well...I believe you. The lovely image is a great fit for this piece. There is nothing I would change about this poem. The flow is as smooth as melted butter, and the meter and rhymes chime along in perfect harmony.
Thank you for brightening up my afternoon, my friend.
Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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I love this. I love the internal rhymes as well as the external ones. You speak of the seasons as though you knew them well...I believe you. The lovely image is a great fit for this piece. There is nothing I would change about this poem. The flow is as smooth as melted butter, and the meter and rhymes chime along in perfect harmony.
Thank you for brightening up my afternoon, my friend.
Jesse
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you Sir. I appreciate your awesome comments.
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You're welcome, my friend, it is good to see you back.
Have a great afternoon,
Jesse
