Sometimes I'm Uninspired
13 Syllable Poem Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
love this confession. it is so natural a thought, that it somehow resonates to me. lol the photo is complimentary to the word bored. good luck in the contest
lulube
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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love this confession. it is so natural a thought, that it somehow resonates to me. lol the photo is complimentary to the word bored. good luck in the contest
lulube
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Lulube. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
Five stars for hitting the 13 syllable challenge but wth ? Lol you are bored and that is why you wrote lol nice to see that even though you are bored as crap you still get a high rank :)
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Five stars for hitting the 13 syllable challenge but wth ? Lol you are bored and that is why you wrote lol nice to see that even though you are bored as crap you still get a high rank :)
Comment Written 05-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Carmen. Yeah, I goof around on here a lot like that. I really appreciate the generous rating. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great day.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Well, this is timely--for me at least. I would like to write today, but I can't think of a thing to say. My life is so uninspired or as you put it, boring. Actually I think that most FanStory members can relate to your thirteen syllables--probably most people in life.
Your post made me laugh. Thank you.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Well, this is timely--for me at least. I would like to write today, but I can't think of a thing to say. My life is so uninspired or as you put it, boring. Actually I think that most FanStory members can relate to your thirteen syllables--probably most people in life.
Your post made me laugh. Thank you.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Debbie. Yeah, life does that to us sometimes. Lol I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have yourself a great day and hopefully something will add a little zest in there as well.
Comment from Ritasher
Hahah, sometimes the best work comes from boredom! Albert Camus said that boredom makes us fully attuned to the passage of time and that time is wasted only when we are not fully aware of it; and with a help of boredom, we can actually realize that absurdity of time and our own temporality. I sound so philosophical, but what I wanted to say - boredom might be the crucial step towards something better. I like that you don't try to fit in with all the 'birds chirping' poems :D cheers!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Hahah, sometimes the best work comes from boredom! Albert Camus said that boredom makes us fully attuned to the passage of time and that time is wasted only when we are not fully aware of it; and with a help of boredom, we can actually realize that absurdity of time and our own temporality. I sound so philosophical, but what I wanted to say - boredom might be the crucial step towards something better. I like that you don't try to fit in with all the 'birds chirping' poems :D cheers!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Hahaha. Yeah, I try to avoid the bird chirping, rainbow, sunset writes. They don't do very much for me. Thank you for the fantastic review, Rita. Somedays boredom gets the best of me so I just go with the flow. lol I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great day.
