Business As Usual
A contest entry8 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I very much enjoyed reading your excellent story. It really drew me in and captured my attention from start to finish. I found myself rooting for the main character all the way and wishing the best for the individual. Your depiction of this situation was quite emotional and touching to me. Your descriptive skills are exceptional and you express yourself very well.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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I very much enjoyed reading your excellent story. It really drew me in and captured my attention from start to finish. I found myself rooting for the main character all the way and wishing the best for the individual. Your depiction of this situation was quite emotional and touching to me. Your descriptive skills are exceptional and you express yourself very well.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thank you so very writer723 for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I really enjoyed your avatar, it shows both strength and wisdom.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, this psychic is really a good fairy who is looking out to protect people! I love it! I think this sounds like a good start for a book and the psychic and the detective can work together to solve crimes and keep people safe!
Best wishes in the contest!!
total of three reading, correct?" (readings)
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Oh, this psychic is really a good fairy who is looking out to protect people! I love it! I think this sounds like a good start for a book and the psychic and the detective can work together to solve crimes and keep people safe!
Best wishes in the contest!!
total of three reading, correct?" (readings)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much Helen for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments. I corrected the mistake before I wrote this. Hugs and smiles!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was brilliant! So clever and a whole story in just 700 words. The thing is, your meanings of those cards dealt sounded so true, so I'm wondering what the real meanings were. No, don't tell me, I might rush out and buy a pack!! Lol. This is a great contest entry, and a six star story, which I don't have to give you. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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That was brilliant! So clever and a whole story in just 700 words. The thing is, your meanings of those cards dealt sounded so true, so I'm wondering what the real meanings were. No, don't tell me, I might rush out and buy a pack!! Lol. This is a great contest entry, and a six star story, which I don't have to give you. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much Sandra, for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Lol, I got the idea from the regular cards I use and the stones I read, so a little of it was true, just a little. Blessings and smiles.
Comment from Wendy G
An interesting story which maintained the interest throughout and had a fine twist at the end. You wrote it well and clearly. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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An interesting story which maintained the interest throughout and had a fine twist at the end. You wrote it well and clearly. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much Wendy for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
To write a story like this, you must have an imagination that will deal a deck of cards and hopefully you will be lucky by the time you deal the last card. I don't play mind games. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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To write a story like this, you must have an imagination that will deal a deck of cards and hopefully you will be lucky by the time you deal the last card. I don't play mind games. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much Rosemary for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from lancellot
A very interesting story. Given the subject and powers of the psychic, I couldn't help thinking, from the moment she answered the phone, " Why is a psychic asking so many questions? Wouldn't they know already?
But the ending was clever. It showed that Andrea had a heart and provides for a happy ending.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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A very interesting story. Given the subject and powers of the psychic, I couldn't help thinking, from the moment she answered the phone, " Why is a psychic asking so many questions? Wouldn't they know already?
But the ending was clever. It showed that Andrea had a heart and provides for a happy ending.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed this story, you do a really great job of bringing the scene to life. I like the way you start with a great hook and a lot of excitement, it works really well. The ending, although left open, is fun and satisfying. Thanks for sharing this
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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I enjoyed this story, you do a really great job of bringing the scene to life. I like the way you start with a great hook and a lot of excitement, it works really well. The ending, although left open, is fun and satisfying. Thanks for sharing this
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you so very much oliver818 for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
What a fun piece! hahahaha Totally unexpected in every respect and just a lot of fun.
There were a couple of nits in the piece so I suggest a really thorough read-through (reading aloud is your best way to spot errors). Go slowly and enunciate each word and make sure everything is where it should be. Obviously, you have the skill and talent to find them for yourself.
--wink--
I was way too interested in reading to stop and make a note! hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
What a fun piece! hahahaha Totally unexpected in every respect and just a lot of fun.
There were a couple of nits in the piece so I suggest a really thorough read-through (reading aloud is your best way to spot errors). Go slowly and enunciate each word and make sure everything is where it should be. Obviously, you have the skill and talent to find them for yourself.
--wink--
I was way too interested in reading to stop and make a note! hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much Robyn for reviewing. I am so glad you enjoyed it, I will definitely reread it and find the mistakes.