Comment from robyn corum

Good

EP,

hahahahahaha! There's one in every crowd - and I'm kinda glad. I love that silly sense of humor - and thank you for sharing this. It brought a big smile.

Notes:

1.) A group (of) people, with a guide,

2.) On(e) of the persons in the group

3.) On of the persons in the group asked a question, of a man that appeared to be associated, in some way, with the trucks.
--> no commas

4.) The group of truckers, looked away and laughed, when the trucker said, "(T)hese are the 'Semi Finals'."
--> no commas except for before the dialogue

Thanks for the smile!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021

Thank you

Comment from lancellot

Good

Interesting humor flash fiction. There are some items to review.
Good work.

notes:

They placed [several, multiple, some} "18-wheeler truck[s]" in the parking lot of the Olympic games.

- missing word

A group [of] people, with a guide, came into the area where the trucks were lined up.

- missing word

{On} of the persons in the group asked a question, of a man that appeared to be associated, in some way, with the trucks.

- One

"Excuse me, Sir. We were wondering what all these trucks were doing, lined up together{?}"

- a question

The group of truckers, looked away and laughed, when the trucker said, {" these} are the 'Semi Finals'."

- "These

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021

Thank you