Reality Checked
Mirrors...who needs them?10 total reviews
Comment from Versch
What a lovely poem for a Mirror contest! The rhythm and the rhymes are excellent. It is the fact of life that we get older every year, and when we look in the mirror we are disappointed with what we see. At least we can still be young at heart. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
What a lovely poem for a Mirror contest! The rhythm and the rhymes are excellent. It is the fact of life that we get older every year, and when we look in the mirror we are disappointed with what we see. At least we can still be young at heart. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Wendy G
Your poem will resonate with many. It is well written, clear and humorous, enjoyable to read. Perfect image to accompany your poem. Wishing you the best for your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
Your poem will resonate with many. It is well written, clear and humorous, enjoyable to read. Perfect image to accompany your poem. Wishing you the best for your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It flows well with your sincere thoughts of aging. It is good to hear that you do not feel old. I like how you added a memory of when you bought that picture. And how it reminds you of aging because you had it so long. Don't give it away. It might be worth a lot of money one day. See if you can find it its worth. Best wishes
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It flows well with your sincere thoughts of aging. It is good to hear that you do not feel old. I like how you added a memory of when you bought that picture. And how it reminds you of aging because you had it so long. Don't give it away. It might be worth a lot of money one day. See if you can find it its worth. Best wishes
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thanks so much for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Bonnie Seach
This poem follows the contest requirements.
It is visually attractive with the accompanying picture and colorscheme.
I like the nose-thumbed attitude toward the mirror.
Well done.
Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
This poem follows the contest requirements.
It is visually attractive with the accompanying picture and colorscheme.
I like the nose-thumbed attitude toward the mirror.
Well done.
Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is all about how we feel and not what we look like, a smile can take 10 years off a person, just remember that and you will always feel younger, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
It is all about how we feel and not what we look like, a smile can take 10 years off a person, just remember that and you will always feel younger, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you sweet lady, I do believe you are right! Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Mirrors can be a friend or foe you are right but true beauty lies within and you don't need a mirror for that! I've gotten old over the years but I'm blessed with every wrinkle I see. Excellent poem!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
Mirrors can be a friend or foe you are right but true beauty lies within and you don't need a mirror for that! I've gotten old over the years but I'm blessed with every wrinkle I see. Excellent poem!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Thank you this excellent review and the 6 stars. :)
Comment from Paul McFarland
Good job. Clean up the meter, and you will have a great one. I think line eight should be worked on. Good job on the ending. It ties everything up quite nicely.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
Good job. Clean up the meter, and you will have a great one. I think line eight should be worked on. Good job on the ending. It ties everything up quite nicely.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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I'll look that line over. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Lana Marie
I like this! Nice job with sharing feelings most of us have when the mirror shows us we're older. After this contest we all may be donating our mirrors to the good will.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
I like this! Nice job with sharing feelings most of us have when the mirror shows us we're older. After this contest we all may be donating our mirrors to the good will.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this delightful review. :)
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Nice poem mystery poet. I'm so glad the writer feels young as I wish this for all our seniors.
Great entry for this contest.
Your rhymes are strong and the poem flows smoothly.
Heads up on your font color though. The yellow against the grey is really hard to see. May I suggest a darker font. Or, if you want to keep the yellow font, make the background dark grey or black.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
Nice poem mystery poet. I'm so glad the writer feels young as I wish this for all our seniors.
Great entry for this contest.
Your rhymes are strong and the poem flows smoothly.
Heads up on your font color though. The yellow against the grey is really hard to see. May I suggest a darker font. Or, if you want to keep the yellow font, make the background dark grey or black.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Thank you, I changed the color because I agree with you. Very much appreciate it. :)
Comment from equestrik
This is a really good entry for the 'mirror Contest' I love your light heartedness and the ending for the mirror is really perfect. All the best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
This is a really good entry for the 'mirror Contest' I love your light heartedness and the ending for the mirror is really perfect. All the best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Thank you for this great review, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)