Schemer
Do not be seduced by the devil and his schemes.2 total reviews
Comment from Badger_29
I gave the six stars because of the strong fellowship that runs through here. I like how you ended this with scripture as I have added a lot of scripture to my writing too.
I really enjoyed reading this piece, and you picked a perfect picture for it too!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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I gave the six stars because of the strong fellowship that runs through here. I like how you ended this with scripture as I have added a lot of scripture to my writing too.
I really enjoyed reading this piece, and you picked a perfect picture for it too!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Why thank you sir!!! I really appreciate your great review!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
First of all, I thought the image really worked well with your story - great job in choosing that!
Second, the story was a little harsh - and appropriately so. *smile* It was so smart to compare the actions of the devil to a human teaching a dog new tricks. It really is that simple and that scary.
The conclusion is a good one - though I'm not sure it's a secret the devil, himself, would reveal. --wink--
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
First of all, I thought the image really worked well with your story - great job in choosing that!
Second, the story was a little harsh - and appropriately so. *smile* It was so smart to compare the actions of the devil to a human teaching a dog new tricks. It really is that simple and that scary.
The conclusion is a good one - though I'm not sure it's a secret the devil, himself, would reveal. --wink--
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Haha! Yes you are right! The devil would never give advice to others that would cause him to flee from them. Thank you for your review and well wishes.