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"Heart Spoken Moments"

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Fine poetry and stories from the Heart

4 total reviews 
Comment from Liberty Justice
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Six stars Ricky what a �� beautiful poem written about this lovely woman who broke your heart. Your lyrics are so loving romantic and touching. Read mine also. Liberty justice

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
    I thank you for your kind thoughts and your review Liberty Justice.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Liberty Justice on 04-Aug-2021
    How you doing Ricky?
Comment from Vangma
Good
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Love at the best! Heart-rending poem. The best line in this poem 'can you put me on and put me off' clearly says it all. But love is not a switch that you turn on and off.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
    Thanks for your kind thoughts and review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Beejay
Excellent
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The emotion and dialogue in this poem , to me, is so very strong, and powerful and genuine.
Does any one know how we can ever mend a broken heart...is it ever possible?

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2021
    Thanks for your kind thought and review as for mending the "Broken Heart?"
    Well I have found of course, that you....
    Yes, you can put a bandage on it.
    And, that's about it.
    Ricky
Comment from Angela Phares
Excellent
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I really felt this. Lots of questioning and observation within the mind which also stimulates the heart. One can feel as if they are absolutely dying of a broken heart. I've been there.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
    Thanks for your timely review Angela and welcome to the writing site!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"