Do Not Disturb
A Good Book in Progress14 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
Great idea. I love reading. Just one more passion to add to my list. I love it all.
This is terrific and did make me smile. The sign says it all. Keep Out!!!
You did another fine job with this one. Is there anything you cannot do? I doubt it. Your ideas are fantastic and you are always on a roll.
God bless.
My best,
Marie
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Great idea. I love reading. Just one more passion to add to my list. I love it all.
This is terrific and did make me smile. The sign says it all. Keep Out!!!
You did another fine job with this one. Is there anything you cannot do? I doubt it. Your ideas are fantastic and you are always on a roll.
God bless.
My best,
Marie
Comment Written 08-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for your sweet review of my contest entry. I think I came in third place with this one. I had a lot of fun on the list. Thanks so much for your kind of you. Sending along my very best to you and yours, Sally XOs
Comment from AnnaLinda
Dear Sally,
Happy Birthday!
Congrats on your 3rd place win with this creative and humorous 5/7/5 entry!
Are you sure you weren't in there writing your own book?
Hope you are having a very blessed day dear friend.
AnnaLinda
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Dear Sally,
Happy Birthday!
Congrats on your 3rd place win with this creative and humorous 5/7/5 entry!
Are you sure you weren't in there writing your own book?
Hope you are having a very blessed day dear friend.
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 03-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the fun review and generous stars! How very kind. I feel extra special just seeing my dear Anna! I could have easily been in there writing. I write six hours a day on average. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
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Wow!!!
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
The poem meets the style standard for a 5- 7- 5 piece. The do not disturb sign is perfect compliment to the text of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
PAL Z
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Hello Sal.
The poem meets the style standard for a 5- 7- 5 piece. The do not disturb sign is perfect compliment to the text of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
PAL Z
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the kind review of my short verse poetry. It is most appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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You're welcome.
PAL Z
Comment from Sankey
This was a good one. Just as well I have some SIXES to spare seeing dear old Bob is gone. Now to get to the post you intended me to read. Good picture as well.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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This was a good one. Just as well I have some SIXES to spare seeing dear old Bob is gone. Now to get to the post you intended me to read. Good picture as well.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the lovely stars and compliments, dear Geoff. You are most kind. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Do Not Disturb, has the right set up and gives reasonable notice that disturbance by whomever is not something desired.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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This humorous 5-7-5, Do Not Disturb, has the right set up and gives reasonable notice that disturbance by whomever is not something desired.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Patty Palmer
I've felt this way often. When I find a book that piques my interest, all I want is to be left alone with my book. Books can help you forget your problems and embark on adventures you probably wouldn't do for real. Good luck with the contest~
Patty
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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I've felt this way often. When I find a book that piques my interest, all I want is to be left alone with my book. Books can help you forget your problems and embark on adventures you probably wouldn't do for real. Good luck with the contest~
Patty
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Patty!
Comment from Wendy G
Clever poem based on the photo and many mothers wish they had such a sign. I heard of one (in the olden days) of one mother of several young children who was never to be disturbed if she was sitting with her apron thrown up over her head. (Maybe she had a book underneath!)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Clever poem based on the photo and many mothers wish they had such a sign. I heard of one (in the olden days) of one mother of several young children who was never to be disturbed if she was sitting with her apron thrown up over her head. (Maybe she had a book underneath!)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Wendy!
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Excellent choice of art to accompany your poem " Do not Disturb"
Never easy to find the words to make one smile or laugh
You have not only presented a means to find humour in what you have written but also have capture the required syllable count and interesting wording to move on and challenges your reader to think and respond "Yes I can read the sign!"
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Excellent choice of art to accompany your poem " Do not Disturb"
Never easy to find the words to make one smile or laugh
You have not only presented a means to find humour in what you have written but also have capture the required syllable count and interesting wording to move on and challenges your reader to think and respond "Yes I can read the sign!"
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, Cecilia. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Once a good story sparks the imagination, it is hard to put a good book down and here the reader is lost inside another world whilst reading their good book, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Once a good story sparks the imagination, it is hard to put a good book down and here the reader is lost inside another world whilst reading their good book, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from siais
The artwork and the lines are in perfect sync and message is clear.
Well done and I won't disturb you before tomorrow ð??? best wishes thanks for sharing, take care!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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The artwork and the lines are in perfect sync and message is clear.
Well done and I won't disturb you before tomorrow ð??? best wishes thanks for sharing, take care!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review!
