geese gone
a 5 7 55 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like your poem; it brings delight in the song of fallen leaves, a sunken moon, cool breeze, and the geese that return to their winter hideout. The summer is fading way too soon.
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I like your poem; it brings delight in the song of fallen leaves, a sunken moon, cool breeze, and the geese that return to their winter hideout. The summer is fading way too soon.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 ode to autumn, Geese Gone, has the proper formatting and sees the sad signs that the sweet summer in sailing south with the honkers.
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This 5-7-5 ode to autumn, Geese Gone, has the proper formatting and sees the sad signs that the sweet summer in sailing south with the honkers.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you have your first vote!
Your poem stood out from the rest .. I love fauna and fancied your reference to geese migrating in autumn .
The rhyme is great, idem your art choice and background hue.
To make the writing more pronounced ( less dull) you should use the
basic editor
and select black .. your words would stand out clearly.
Keep safe!
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Ciao mystery poet, you have your first vote!
Your poem stood out from the rest .. I love fauna and fancied your reference to geese migrating in autumn .
The rhyme is great, idem your art choice and background hue.
To make the writing more pronounced ( less dull) you should use the
basic editor
and select black .. your words would stand out clearly.
Keep safe!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
Comment from Paul McFarland
Excellent job in a very difficult prompt. The rhyme scheme here is very unforced, and the poem reads very smoothly. This really hits home for me here in Maine.
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Excellent job in a very difficult prompt. The rhyme scheme here is very unforced, and the poem reads very smoothly. This really hits home for me here in Maine.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
Comment from Lana Marie
Well this was a fun refreshing contest entry to the Ode to Autumn prompt.
I enjoyed reading this poem. Those geese here in the North definitely take flight to warmer climates.
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Well this was a fun refreshing contest entry to the Ode to Autumn prompt.
I enjoyed reading this poem. Those geese here in the North definitely take flight to warmer climates.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021