Social Media Grip
A feelings poem6 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Yes, I totally agree. I have friends, family members and acquaintances who live their days and nights plugged into social media. The conservative voice has become more ridiculed and ostracized by the day. I spend very little time there anymore.
Sending along my very best today as always, and my very best for the contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Yes, I totally agree. I have friends, family members and acquaintances who live their days and nights plugged into social media. The conservative voice has become more ridiculed and ostracized by the day. I spend very little time there anymore.
Sending along my very best today as always, and my very best for the contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank You so much Sally for review and your comments. I appreciate the well wishes as well .
Comment from Liz O'Neill
All those vulnerable to bullying need to read this poem. One thing it does is tell them they are believed. That in itself becomes an important steps in healing. Becoming stronger does not mean we will nolonger be targeted or bullied. It means we will not let them break or spirit.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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All those vulnerable to bullying need to read this poem. One thing it does is tell them they are believed. That in itself becomes an important steps in healing. Becoming stronger does not mean we will nolonger be targeted or bullied. It means we will not let them break or spirit.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank You Liz! I really appreciate your review. I love your feedback.
Comment from Summer Lange
You did a good job. It's written nicely. It has passion and depth. I felt like most of the poem was blaming social media, for what I'm not certain. And then all of a sudden it's all ok cuz we can overcome. I'm sorry if that seems harsh. It's not meant to be. I read it 3 times. I can't say anything phenomenal or horrible. You did a good job.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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You did a good job. It's written nicely. It has passion and depth. I felt like most of the poem was blaming social media, for what I'm not certain. And then all of a sudden it's all ok cuz we can overcome. I'm sorry if that seems harsh. It's not meant to be. I read it 3 times. I can't say anything phenomenal or horrible. You did a good job.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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I mostly had some young adult girls on my mind when I wrote this. I?ve seen so many girls get caught up in only allowing their social media accounts to validate them. Many getting the wrong kind of attention and tuning out everyone else around them. I know I didn?t specify this in the poem.
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Oh I totally get it. That makes sense. Thanks for taking my opinion so we'll. I don't like upsetting anyone.
Comment from pookietoo
Great job. You are right. We can't let social media run our lives. You expressed your thoughts well in this poem. Keep writing your poems. Good luck to you. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Great job. You are right. We can't let social media run our lives. You expressed your thoughts well in this poem. Keep writing your poems. Good luck to you. Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank You so much! I appreciate your review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from BethShelby
I do agree with you on the negative effects of social media. It is what is dividing this country and dividing families. Too many are willing to accept what they see on the computer or hear on the news as fact without bothering to check it out. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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I do agree with you on the negative effects of social media. It is what is dividing this country and dividing families. Too many are willing to accept what they see on the computer or hear on the news as fact without bothering to check it out. Nicely written.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank You for your review and it is sad the division that?s happened
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Social media spreads fear among the people and I have seen this happen in my town, especially over the virus. I have continued to wear a mask in certain circumstances, but outside in the fresh air it is not necessary unless you are talking with someone at close quarters. I enjoyed your words here and you are so right, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Social media spreads fear among the people and I have seen this happen in my town, especially over the virus. I have continued to wear a mask in certain circumstances, but outside in the fresh air it is not necessary unless you are talking with someone at close quarters. I enjoyed your words here and you are so right, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank You Dolly for reviewing this and for your comments.