It Gets Better
Hope for everything to work out in your life.5 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
It is about attitude as you indicated. Unfortunately, many reader will at the patterns of their lives and develop growing doubts of the words of the speaker in this instruction. Hope has always been a stranger to them,
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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It is about attitude as you indicated. Unfortunately, many reader will at the patterns of their lives and develop growing doubts of the words of the speaker in this instruction. Hope has always been a stranger to them,
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Summer Lange
It was a nice way to encourage someone to hang in there because like you said it gets better. I liked how you wrote about God making it better. For sure. Keep on writing
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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It was a nice way to encourage someone to hang in there because like you said it gets better. I liked how you wrote about God making it better. For sure. Keep on writing
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from pookietoo
Wonderful picture to go with your hope poem. Yes, we can hope for things to get better if we are depressed. You expressed your feelings quite well. I wish you good luck in this contest. Keep smiling!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Wonderful picture to go with your hope poem. Yes, we can hope for things to get better if we are depressed. You expressed your feelings quite well. I wish you good luck in this contest. Keep smiling!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you! :)
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Having hope in your heart certainly gives us a boost and improves our outlook on life, I enjoyed your uplifting words, when you reach rock bottom, the only way is up, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Having hope in your heart certainly gives us a boost and improves our outlook on life, I enjoyed your uplifting words, when you reach rock bottom, the only way is up, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Paul McFarland
I get the very important message, but I find that there I'm struggling with the connection with some of the stanzas. If you smooth things out, you will have a nice poem.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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I get the very important message, but I find that there I'm struggling with the connection with some of the stanzas. If you smooth things out, you will have a nice poem.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you! How can I fix it to make it a five stars rating?
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As I reread your poem, I find that I can see a separate poem in each stanza. Looking at it in this way, I will give you five stars.