Daydreams from the Ashes
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Like Silver Threads"Poems and meditations
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Comment from robyn corum
KO,
OOOoooOOoooOOoooo... My, my. There is so much here. So much revealed and so much left hidden. I'm trying to determine the relationship - is it one that's ending? That shouldn't be beginning? I'm not sure, but it seems the writer has mixed feelings about it, too.
Feeling soft things but also regret. Very cool look inside.
I loved the spider web description. I admit I don't understand all of this, but I really appreciated and admired it. It shows your heart and creativity. Thank you!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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KO,
OOOoooOOoooOOoooo... My, my. There is so much here. So much revealed and so much left hidden. I'm trying to determine the relationship - is it one that's ending? That shouldn't be beginning? I'm not sure, but it seems the writer has mixed feelings about it, too.
Feeling soft things but also regret. Very cool look inside.
I loved the spider web description. I admit I don't understand all of this, but I really appreciated and admired it. It shows your heart and creativity. Thank you!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, Robyn. I appreciate it. It was definitely some feelings that needed some kind of words for it, even the somewhat ambiguous kind. I hope your week is going great and that it only gets better.
Comment from AJ McCall
I love the flow of this poem. And I know you don't usually do poems but this definitely caught me - literally, like a spide's web LOL. I read the author notes, I pray that everything is well on your side and you're well. Nice to see your post! (P.S I'll be posting my African War Queen chapter soon. I'm finishing up the end part and we'll be able to talk more about it, if it's fine with you.)
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I love the flow of this poem. And I know you don't usually do poems but this definitely caught me - literally, like a spide's web LOL. I read the author notes, I pray that everything is well on your side and you're well. Nice to see your post! (P.S I'll be posting my African War Queen chapter soon. I'm finishing up the end part and we'll be able to talk more about it, if it's fine with you.)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm holding up alright other than being crazy. I'm glad you're still working away on your African War Queen project! It's important to put the time in on things you love. You'll have to let me know how it goes. I hope you're having a great week and that it gets even better.
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You're very welcome! I'm glad to hear you're at least normal crazy lol. I will definitely let you know when or you'll see it when I post it. I hope you're having a lovely weekend!!!
Comment from AliMom
Lovely metaphors and personification. Really good word choices. Sounds heartfelt. It isn't wrenching and tragic, just quietly, softly. poetically remorseful and regrettably sad. I do like the repetition of "I do not know if I love you."
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Lovely metaphors and personification. Really good word choices. Sounds heartfelt. It isn't wrenching and tragic, just quietly, softly. poetically remorseful and regrettably sad. I do like the repetition of "I do not know if I love you."
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the time and I'm glad it came across well. I hope you have a good day.
Comment from Lana Marie
I enjoyed reading your open and honest thoughts about how you feel. That's kind of a tough spot to be in when you're in a relationship and you have those kind of feelings that you don't know if you should express them or not because it could hurt the other person's feelings. It's hard to walk away from those relationships.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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I enjoyed reading your open and honest thoughts about how you feel. That's kind of a tough spot to be in when you're in a relationship and you have those kind of feelings that you don't know if you should express them or not because it could hurt the other person's feelings. It's hard to walk away from those relationships.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the time you gave it and the understanding. I hope you have a good day.
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You?re welcome!
Comment from LisaMay
I think this is an innovative expression of feelings - of uncertainty about love, and an acute physical and emotional awareness, which suits being unrhymed. Your imagery is fresh and evocative, so I enjoyed your poem very much - a respite from bland offerings.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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I think this is an innovative expression of feelings - of uncertainty about love, and an acute physical and emotional awareness, which suits being unrhymed. Your imagery is fresh and evocative, so I enjoyed your poem very much - a respite from bland offerings.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the time and I'm glad it came across well. I hope you have a good day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our true feelings and emotions are evident in our deeds and we need no words when our actions speak louder. The smallest gesture can show much love, I enjoyed your words here filled with emotion, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Our true feelings and emotions are evident in our deeds and we need no words when our actions speak louder. The smallest gesture can show much love, I enjoyed your words here filled with emotion, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the time and I'm glad it came across well. I hope you have a good day.
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading your FreeVerse poem and could feel the sincerity of genuine feelings and personal thoughts. You did a great job with this and I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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I enjoyed reading your FreeVerse poem and could feel the sincerity of genuine feelings and personal thoughts. You did a great job with this and I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the time and I'm glad it came across well. I hope you have a good day.