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Pappa's Memories and Ramblings

Viewing comments for Chapter 117 "Greatful for Healing "
Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings

6 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
    Apologies for the pictures, Thanks for the Review
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
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Yay! I'm grateful that you saved your knee! Straightforward and to the point. Rhyming works and message received. Clearly the pictures suit.

Thank you for writing!

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Support
Comment from joycetreasures
Exceptional
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Hello OC Poet,
Praise the Lord you didn't lose your leg. What a true blessing? Your 5-7-5 was to the point with a deep message. Well done. Of course, your imagery was the most vivid one I have ever seen. Thanks for sharing. You met the requirements and your message was unbelieveable touching. Thanks

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Exceptional rating and Kind compliments
reply by joycetreasures on 27-Jul-2021
    You are so welcome.
Comment from ShirleyT1
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Wow! The photo makes me hurt all over. If this is healing, I'm glad I didn't see it before. So sorry, but I'm glad the surgery was not necessary. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Kind compliments
Comment from Ashlyn Stone
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Not really good a judging these poems. I do better with stories. But it seems you followed the writing prompt and it is a grateful type poem. Thanks for sharing your writing.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Kind Compliments
Comment from lancellot
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Well, the poem itself is well crafted. You went the extra mile with matching end rhymes. Yes, the photo is graphic and at first, second and third glance, it seem contrary to the theme of the poem, but if you say so. I would recommend think twice about using it. Just saying.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Suggestion