Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 117 "Greatful for Healing "Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Apologies for the pictures, Thanks for the Review
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
Yay! I'm grateful that you saved your knee! Straightforward and to the point. Rhyming works and message received. Clearly the pictures suit.
Thank you for writing!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
Yay! I'm grateful that you saved your knee! Straightforward and to the point. Rhyming works and message received. Clearly the pictures suit.
Thank you for writing!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the Review and Support
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello OC Poet,
Praise the Lord you didn't lose your leg. What a true blessing? Your 5-7-5 was to the point with a deep message. Well done. Of course, your imagery was the most vivid one I have ever seen. Thanks for sharing. You met the requirements and your message was unbelieveable touching. Thanks
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
Hello OC Poet,
Praise the Lord you didn't lose your leg. What a true blessing? Your 5-7-5 was to the point with a deep message. Well done. Of course, your imagery was the most vivid one I have ever seen. Thanks for sharing. You met the requirements and your message was unbelieveable touching. Thanks
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the Exceptional rating and Kind compliments
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You are so welcome.
Comment from ShirleyT1
Wow! The photo makes me hurt all over. If this is healing, I'm glad I didn't see it before. So sorry, but I'm glad the surgery was not necessary. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
Wow! The photo makes me hurt all over. If this is healing, I'm glad I didn't see it before. So sorry, but I'm glad the surgery was not necessary. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the Review and Kind compliments
Comment from Ashlyn Stone
Not really good a judging these poems. I do better with stories. But it seems you followed the writing prompt and it is a grateful type poem. Thanks for sharing your writing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
Not really good a judging these poems. I do better with stories. But it seems you followed the writing prompt and it is a grateful type poem. Thanks for sharing your writing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the Review and Kind Compliments
Comment from lancellot
Well, the poem itself is well crafted. You went the extra mile with matching end rhymes. Yes, the photo is graphic and at first, second and third glance, it seem contrary to the theme of the poem, but if you say so. I would recommend think twice about using it. Just saying.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
Well, the poem itself is well crafted. You went the extra mile with matching end rhymes. Yes, the photo is graphic and at first, second and third glance, it seem contrary to the theme of the poem, but if you say so. I would recommend think twice about using it. Just saying.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the Review and Suggestion