Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

What a stunningly lovely little girl - looking at her brings happiness to the reader. Your poem is great and points out many ways and things we can be happy about. Very nice work presented here.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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Comment from Jarvis Popovich

Excellent

Such a nice painted scene of emotions here. It's using familiar aspects to relate to, and done well. Good flow and rhyming scheme.

The theme is nice and consistent. Thanks. A good read.

Keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image.
-A well written poem
with effective images and rhyme.
-You have used many good
examples of things that
bring you joy, like birds and
their songs, children, and rainbows.
-A very nice conclusion that
brings all of the examples together.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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Thanks so very much!

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Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Children can find their joy in the simplest things. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the picture.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi Mystery Writer,

Very nice with a gentle peaceful feeling conveyed in your lines. We often get so bogged down by the division and angst in life that we overlook all that really matters to all of us in the end. Peaceful feelings that nurture us and bring us joy. We all want that.

Your wise words bring us back to the simple things that sustain us all.

Great work! All the best to you in the contest :-)

Have a great week,
Senyai

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

In the hustle and bustle of our everyday life, it can often feel like peace is far away. But a lot of wise people have taught us about the value of brotherly love, tranquillity, and the true meaning of what happiness could mean for us in our lives. I loved your sweetly penned poem accompanied by the wonderful photo of the little girl. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your poem is positive and full of happiness and all children have great positivity in them and it is only their environment that dulls their fervour, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Wonderful list of beautiful things that can make anyone happy. I especially liked that the joys included "children sharing" and "kids are fed" and how it ended with all being children of the Heavenly Father. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2021

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written happy poem you have penned for the Happy Poems contest. You gave some very good examples in your poem of happy things. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021

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Thanks so very much.

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Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A sweet poem, thinking of all the lovely things that make one happy and thankful. It is well composed, and is accompanied by a happy image. Best wishes for your entry.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021

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