Sizzling Sunset
Rhyming Alliteration poem for the contest8 total reviews
Comment from pharp
Mystery Poet,
You did an exceptional job in the penning of this beautiful poem for the Rhyming Alliteration writing prompt.
Oustanding presentation, excellent internal and ending rhyming, and a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing the very best to you in the contest.
Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Mystery Poet,
You did an exceptional job in the penning of this beautiful poem for the Rhyming Alliteration writing prompt.
Oustanding presentation, excellent internal and ending rhyming, and a most enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing the very best to you in the contest.
Have a wonderful day.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share your sentiments! It is much appreciated - and especially for the generous rating!
Comment from pookietoo
Very good rhyming job
I love the descriptive words you used. Good luck to you in this contest. Best wishes. Keep writing your poems. Keep a smile on your face.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Very good rhyming job
I love the descriptive words you used. Good luck to you in this contest. Best wishes. Keep writing your poems. Keep a smile on your face.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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Thank you! And congrats on placing third in the happy poem contest! Love the sentiments.
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Thank you very much
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I love how you have constructed your poem. It meets the requirements for the contest and then some! Your meter is lovely and even and your words and artwork are a perfect pairing. Your theme is relatable and I'm sure all readers will appreciate the sentiment. I particularly enjoy line 4 - it's so pleasing how those words tickle the teeth and tongue!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Hello :)
I love how you have constructed your poem. It meets the requirements for the contest and then some! Your meter is lovely and even and your words and artwork are a perfect pairing. Your theme is relatable and I'm sure all readers will appreciate the sentiment. I particularly enjoy line 4 - it's so pleasing how those words tickle the teeth and tongue!
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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I am so happy you enjoyed this piece. It was a challenge to include all the alliteration and still have it make sense. Thanks for dropping by to share your thoughts!
Comment from Chris Davies
That was really well done! Not only meeting the criteria of the contest but actually penning a thoughtful poem with a nice theme. I hope you fare well in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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That was really well done! Not only meeting the criteria of the contest but actually penning a thoughtful poem with a nice theme. I hope you fare well in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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I am glad you enjoyed this one on sizzling sunsets and poetic inspirations. Thanks for sharing your insights and for the generous rating!
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You're very welcome - it's a good poem.
Comment from equestrik
This is good. Not only good for the alliteration contest but good overall. I love the final three lines. How lovely the poetry of memories can be. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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This is good. Not only good for the alliteration contest but good overall. I love the final three lines. How lovely the poetry of memories can be. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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I am glad you enjoyed this one on sizzling sunsets and poetic inspirations. Thanks for sharing your insights and for the generous rating!
Comment from E. Denison
Lovely work here, mystery writer. The content, imagery, and paired photograph are perfect for the current time of year, and the lines read fluidly. Thank you for sharing - good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Lovely work here, mystery writer. The content, imagery, and paired photograph are perfect for the current time of year, and the lines read fluidly. Thank you for sharing - good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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I am glad you enjoyed this one on sizzling sunsets and poetic inspirations. Thanks for sharing your insights and positive feedback.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image, presentation,
and excellent title.
-You wrote a very good
poem that meets all of the requirements.
-The imagery paints a vivid word
picture of the scene, and the
rhyme adds to the flow of the poem.
-Good alliteration about the sunset
and then "the poet's pen."
-My favorite line is about
the "sizzling sunset," and I
like the conclusion, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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-Nice image, presentation,
and excellent title.
-You wrote a very good
poem that meets all of the requirements.
-The imagery paints a vivid word
picture of the scene, and the
rhyme adds to the flow of the poem.
-Good alliteration about the sunset
and then "the poet's pen."
-My favorite line is about
the "sizzling sunset," and I
like the conclusion, too.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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I am glad you enjoyed this one on sizzling sunsets and poetic inspirations. Thanks for sharing your insights and positive feedback.
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You are very welcome. I think many of us are experiencing sizzling days!!
Comment from RodG
I can easily relate to the Speaker in this poem who knows that "sizzling summer sunsets" will be his muse in winter when he must rely on memories. I especially like how you blend the colors in lines 1-3. Rod
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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I can easily relate to the Speaker in this poem who knows that "sizzling summer sunsets" will be his muse in winter when he must rely on memories. I especially like how you blend the colors in lines 1-3. Rod
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insights - just making memories this summer for my muse in the winter.
