Loneliness Is My Only Company.
Pining On A Mountain Of Misery...2 total reviews
Comment from Lana Marie
You can feel the sadness of being alone in your writing. Good luck in the contest, you did a great job forming a free verse poem for this entry. I enjoyed this.
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You can feel the sadness of being alone in your writing. Good luck in the contest, you did a great job forming a free verse poem for this entry. I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2021
Comment from LisaMay
You use effective imagery of crying, rain, and umbrella to portray the misery of loneliness when separated from a beloved. I liked the way you introduced the occasional rhyme, both internal and end of line.
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You use effective imagery of crying, rain, and umbrella to portray the misery of loneliness when separated from a beloved. I liked the way you introduced the occasional rhyme, both internal and end of line.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2021