Comment from MAMONIA

Excellent

I have to say you have kept my interest throughout. I had no difficulty keeping the characters straight in my mind as each one surfaced on
the scene.
Your story has a quick pace, an extraordinary cast, and keeps the
reader on his toes.
It looks like we are making headway on the case. Looking forward to the next chapter.
My best,
Marie

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021

Thank you for the lovely review and kindest compliments, dear Marie. Reading your review is a huge blessing to my week. Sending along my very best,
Sal XOs

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is another great chapter, Sally, I like the suspense you are able to create. The law enforcement finding the gun and dusting for prints in the big rig should very efficient. I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to more.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021

Thank you very much for the lovely review and compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs

Comment from Sankey

Exceptional

You never disappoint us! Another excellent chapter. Well done. A few spags/suggestions. trained(,) as he went(,) in the technical gathering

I'd say he's about you['re](r) height, ma'am, 5' 10" or so.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021

Thank you for the wonderful review and super shiny sixes! The critique is always appreciated. Thank you so much! Blessings always,
Sal XOs?.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Sally Law
My goodness you know how to keep us readers intrigued, but you are slowly getting to the part; we will figure who the hitchhiker is. Sally, I'm still get familiar with all the interning chacters in your story
Smiles I see that you are using your name (Sally Law0 for the woman detective.
Gert

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021

Thank you very much for the super great review and kind comments. I?m so glad you?re enjoying this, dear Gert. Blessings always,
Sal XOs

reply by Gert sherwood on 26-Jul-2021

You are so welcome
Sally Law

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

I was hoping that Big D's poorly digested lunch would have missed Sally's shoes! I like all the details you are giving and how carefully the detectives are examining that truck. Good use of humor with the newlyweds and we know who stole their clothes. I hope they can catch him soon!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021

Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars, Helen dear. It is most appreciated. I love ?Big D? and have a lot of fun with his character. I?m so glad you?re enjoying this book.
Sending you my best today and love and blessings always,
Sal XOs?.

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

The two dead bodies found in the sunken car, are adding much suspicion within Sally's team, about whoever the person was that did the murdering. There is good evidence found with a trucker who picked up a hitch-hiker, that may lead to the identification. Meanwhile, Tony the Tiger is still in pursuit.

Ralf

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021

Thank you very much for your kind review of my book chapter. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sally, this is a great continuation, and it's not only well written but it's also well paced. I really liked it. So it seems that they are narrowing in on the suspect.
I liked the detail about the boots. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021

Thank you so much for the super great review and generous stars, dear Ulla. I?m delighted and blessed. Sending you my best today and love and blessings always,
Sal XOs?

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

hmm, very interesting. Everything is well written and edited. The officers and detective sound just like they were from an episode of CSI. The conversation was very believable. Also, i liked Analiese's rage. I do wonder if the font should be a point larger, for better viewing.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021

Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments. I?m sorry if the font is difficult to read. I?m blind, and advanced editor with a book is nearly impossible for me. It takes me three times longer than basic editor and I find it to be flighty. Most of my writing is done with my voice over text and blind assist keyboard. I?m glad you were able to enjoy it. I really appreciate you stopping by.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

We are in the midst of the hunt now, Sally. I even loved climbing into the big rig and sitting behind the wheel...my husband used to own and drive one. (Just a quick memory - thank you). There getting closer to finding the facts on one case, but Olivia was so close. Another great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.

Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021

Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear Carol. Blessings always,
Sal XOs?

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am worried about Suzy and King, since the bad guy is in the Hotel. I sure hope they remain safe. I know King will do his job. I do enjoy reading this story.

The curator didn't wait to swallow the soybean curd, "Why are you calling me on this line, Tony? Where is your head?" (period needed after curd, it's not a speech tag)

Now that I sitting here with you, I'm gaining clarity." (I'm?????)

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021

Thank you.