Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Running Blind~ Chapter Ten"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
30 total reviews
Comment from royowen
That's a little hilarious two nude newly weds, suffering from misadventure with skinny dipping while thinking their possessions and clothing were safe, probably luck to discover they were actually safe, and a call from a crook, saying "send me money", well done, Sally, great episode. Beautifully written, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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That's a little hilarious two nude newly weds, suffering from misadventure with skinny dipping while thinking their possessions and clothing were safe, probably luck to discover they were actually safe, and a call from a crook, saying "send me money", well done, Sally, great episode. Beautifully written, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thank you for lovely review and putting up with my sense of humor. Murder mysteries just need a bit of comedy relief. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Good job Sally
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another great chapter, Sally. There is a lot of suspicious activity going on, but it seems some evidence is emerging about the missing person from the car. Looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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This is another great chapter, Sally. There is a lot of suspicious activity going on, but it seems some evidence is emerging about the missing person from the car. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Thank you for lovely review and generous compliments, dear Judy. Blessings always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Here's to another wonderful chapter in your suspenseful story! I hope they find this Tony Alfanzi. His girlfriend Analiese is no prize, either, and she's got a temper; I feel sorry for the hotel cleaning staff! Detective Sally is still in danger. And the skinny-dipping couple escaped with their lives.
Errors and suggestions:
Experienced in CSI procedures Detective Lembowsky trained as he went ...
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Experienced in CSI procedures, Detective Lembowsky trained as he went ...
she continued, "Let's go skinny dipping," he said. "Our clothes will be perfectly safe," he said. Ha! We were robbed... in the middle of nowhere! Not even a wet match was left!"
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she continued, "'Let's go skinny dipping,' he said. 'Our clothes will be perfectly safe.' Ha! We were robbed... in the middle of nowhere! Not even a wet match was left!"
I think Samson deserves a spot in your character list, along with the other detective dogs!
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I look forward to learning more about Olivia a/k/a Camille.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Here's to another wonderful chapter in your suspenseful story! I hope they find this Tony Alfanzi. His girlfriend Analiese is no prize, either, and she's got a temper; I feel sorry for the hotel cleaning staff! Detective Sally is still in danger. And the skinny-dipping couple escaped with their lives.
Errors and suggestions:
Experienced in CSI procedures Detective Lembowsky trained as he went ...
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Experienced in CSI procedures, Detective Lembowsky trained as he went ...
she continued, "Let's go skinny dipping," he said. "Our clothes will be perfectly safe," he said. Ha! We were robbed... in the middle of nowhere! Not even a wet match was left!"
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she continued, "'Let's go skinny dipping,' he said. 'Our clothes will be perfectly safe.' Ha! We were robbed... in the middle of nowhere! Not even a wet match was left!"
I think Samson deserves a spot in your character list, along with the other detective dogs!
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I look forward to learning more about Olivia a/k/a Camille.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and helpful critique. I was struggling with the conversation part between the couple. I didn?t think quotation marks were needed, but I guess I?m wrong. Mike mentioned the same thing. I appreciate my great reviewers. Thank you, again. I have a twist where Olivia is concerned. Stay tuned.
Love and blessings always,
Sal XOs?
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Samson used to be on here. I will amend it!
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You're very welcome, as always, dear Sally. Yay! Bring back Samson (great name for a K-9 unit dog, by the way).
Who's Mike? Maybe I know him?
I look forward to the Olivia twist -- different from Oliver Twist, lol.
Love and prayers, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Ric Myworld
Another fine chapter to get my week started off in fine fashion and wondering what will happen next. Dead bodies and millions of dollars keep eyes wide open. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Another fine chapter to get my week started off in fine fashion and wondering what will happen next. Dead bodies and millions of dollars keep eyes wide open. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Ric. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)) XOs
Comment from ShirleyT1
Another chapter full of suspense. Your story is fast paced, and this chapter has a lot of details. I felt like I was right there with the characters as they discovered and recorded evidence. Great writing!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Another chapter full of suspense. Your story is fast paced, and this chapter has a lot of details. I felt like I was right there with the characters as they discovered and recorded evidence. Great writing!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the super kind review and compliments, dear Shirley. So glad to see you today. Sending along my very best,
Sal XOs?
Comment from LovnPeace
It is like watching CSI reading this story Sally. I really enjoy it and your characters are so interesting. Bringing a bit of Louisiana to life also. Love and Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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It is like watching CSI reading this story Sally. I really enjoy it and your characters are so interesting. Bringing a bit of Louisiana to life also. Love and Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and encouraging comments, dear Barbara. I wanted to be a fingerprinting specialist for the FBI. My mother said no. I vent my forensic ambitions through my writing. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Wendy G
Continues to be interesting and intriguing, with lots of details adding to the complexity. Quite a lot of forensic evidence, and finding the gun probably used was a plus. They'll all have to watch their backs. Well written, as always.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Continues to be interesting and intriguing, with lots of details adding to the complexity. Quite a lot of forensic evidence, and finding the gun probably used was a plus. They'll all have to watch their backs. Well written, as always.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and compliments, Wendy dear. It always so good to see you.
Sal XOs
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You begin with your usual tongue-in-cheek humor: "Stabbing the salad violently with her fork, she wished it was Tony Alfanzi" This is cool, it's as if we are taking the course. I don't think there are many readers who will not feel enriched by this section. The door to door search will get the reader here.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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You begin with your usual tongue-in-cheek humor: "Stabbing the salad violently with her fork, she wished it was Tony Alfanzi" This is cool, it's as if we are taking the course. I don't think there are many readers who will not feel enriched by this section. The door to door search will get the reader here.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and insightful comments. You get me and my sense of humor. So glad you?re staying on. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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I'm with you for the long run.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
As I read through this it occurred to me there is a lot of forensic evidence that needs to be evaluated. I got stuck a little on the scene changes but then went back and reread in order to clarify.
The honeymooners saw the crime scene tape and the tarp covering bodies. I'm sure that would have an impact on a honeymoon. Being caught up in a murder investigation certainly would have a way of dampening the mood.
PAL Z
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Hello Sal.
As I read through this it occurred to me there is a lot of forensic evidence that needs to be evaluated. I got stuck a little on the scene changes but then went back and reread in order to clarify.
The honeymooners saw the crime scene tape and the tarp covering bodies. I'm sure that would have an impact on a honeymoon. Being caught up in a murder investigation certainly would have a way of dampening the mood.
PAL Z
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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I had some friends that had their clothes stolen while skinny dipping. I had to include them. Thank you for the lovely review and compliments, dear Z. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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You're very welcome.
PAL Z
Comment from Ben Colder
Yea, I think the thief got away, and it is but a matter of time when the blind girl will solve the mystery. Reading about the dead bodies in a sunken car made me think about a F B I story I saw last night on Roku.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Yea, I think the thief got away, and it is but a matter of time when the blind girl will solve the mystery. Reading about the dead bodies in a sunken car made me think about a F B I story I saw last night on Roku.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and star blast, dear Ben. It is most appreciated. I almost went to work for the FBI in fingerprinting. My mother said no. God led me in a different direction, a great one. I live out that part of me in my stories. I especially love writing about the crime scene.
Sending along my very best,
Sal XOs
