Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Running Blind~ Chapter Ten"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
30 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
One of the things that makes your stories so successful is the attention given to details--like with the forensic evidence that was gathered. It rings true to the reader and is much appreciated! Smiles, Janet
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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One of the things that makes your stories so successful is the attention given to details--like with the forensic evidence that was gathered. It rings true to the reader and is much appreciated! Smiles, Janet
Comment Written 23-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and for catching up. I'm so very honored and blessed. Blessings always, dear Janet.,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
Sorry for being so late with this review, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. A lot of loose ends were tied in. There was so much action going on in the 4 sections that I almost forgot a couple of things... one, that Tony the Tiger is still on the loose... Sally is in danger. And two, that Olivia/Camille is waiting to be discovered.
At the moment, Tony isn't aware how close he is to being nabbed by the authorities. He should be disappearing from the area, but he's more concerned about getting some money to buy some clothes.
In the first section, I love these lines (and appreciated the rhyme of "money/honey")...
"Oops, gotta run. Hurry with the money, honey!"
Stabbing the salad violently with her fork, she wished it was Tony Alfanzi. "I can't believe I was once married to him!" Blind with fury, Analiese threw the salad against the wall, then picked up her cell phone.
Analiese is quite upset, and someone has a cleaning job to do in her office.
In the next section, I enjoyed the comical interlude with the naked honeymooners, "Let's go skinny dipping." But actually, the naked swim might have saved them from Tony's .38 !
I wondered if fingerprints would keep underwater, but I'm sure you've investigated that.
Evidence is mounting against Tony,
"Anything else noticeable?" I asked. "Scars, birthmarks, piercings, or tattoos?"
"Yes, the name Ana was tattooed on his left wrist."
Of course, the "Ana" tattoo refers to Analiese Irving, and we know that they were once married.
I wondered why they started the transport truck. What purpose was there in doing that?
"It was quite thrilling to be in the driver's seat of a rig. My gloved hands started the engine and a burst of cold air ensued."
Looking forward to the next chapter, Sal'! Tony is in for a big surprise. And so is Camille.
Marvelous writing, my dear! Keep up the good work!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Hi Sally,
Sorry for being so late with this review, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. A lot of loose ends were tied in. There was so much action going on in the 4 sections that I almost forgot a couple of things... one, that Tony the Tiger is still on the loose... Sally is in danger. And two, that Olivia/Camille is waiting to be discovered.
At the moment, Tony isn't aware how close he is to being nabbed by the authorities. He should be disappearing from the area, but he's more concerned about getting some money to buy some clothes.
In the first section, I love these lines (and appreciated the rhyme of "money/honey")...
"Oops, gotta run. Hurry with the money, honey!"
Stabbing the salad violently with her fork, she wished it was Tony Alfanzi. "I can't believe I was once married to him!" Blind with fury, Analiese threw the salad against the wall, then picked up her cell phone.
Analiese is quite upset, and someone has a cleaning job to do in her office.
In the next section, I enjoyed the comical interlude with the naked honeymooners, "Let's go skinny dipping." But actually, the naked swim might have saved them from Tony's .38 !
I wondered if fingerprints would keep underwater, but I'm sure you've investigated that.
Evidence is mounting against Tony,
"Anything else noticeable?" I asked. "Scars, birthmarks, piercings, or tattoos?"
"Yes, the name Ana was tattooed on his left wrist."
Of course, the "Ana" tattoo refers to Analiese Irving, and we know that they were once married.
I wondered why they started the transport truck. What purpose was there in doing that?
"It was quite thrilling to be in the driver's seat of a rig. My gloved hands started the engine and a burst of cold air ensued."
Looking forward to the next chapter, Sal'! Tony is in for a big surprise. And so is Camille.
Marvelous writing, my dear! Keep up the good work!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 31-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and just in time, dear pilgrim. I was watching for you! I'm so honored by this. I'm delighted you enjoyed this and the comic relief. It's really needed in crime mystery, I think. The temperature down here is mind boggling, thus the air to investigate the cab. Sending you my very best and blessings always, dear Kim,
Sal XOs...
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Air-conditioning in the sweltering cab... I didn't think of that, Sally. Now it makes some sense. Even up here in southern New Brunswick lately, we've had some very hot & humid days. But funny thing, last night the temperature went way down. And this morning, it felt like mid-September at only 12 degrees Celsius. What a nice relief. We're lucky in Saint John though, next door to the Bay of Fundy. We get more relief along the coast than Fredericton or Woodstock.
After I reviewed your chapter, my wife & I went out to breakfast at AJ's Restaurant... French Toast with maple syrup, and sausages with raspberry jam. Then we went down to Kent's (hardware store) for some bags of black earth. (Judy and our 89 year old neighbor Mary Orr like to keep me busy planting shrubs and flowers.) When I went to grab a bag off the outdoors pallet, I felt an almighty sting. I looked at the end of my 3rd finger/right hand and spied what I thought was a tiny blade of glass. But it turned out to be a stinger from a paper wasp that lay quite dead. You talk about pain! I haven't felt pain like that in over 55 years, the last time I got stung. Ice took the pain away, thankfully. A formidable enemy!
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I?ve been near you. Nova Scotia is on the Bay of Fundy. I don?t remember heat although we were there in August. The water was frigid. It?s nearing 100 regularly here, then it rains. :)
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I don't know how you stand it. I'm glad our summers are only 3 months long.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
You know, Sal:
It is really amazing that more truck drivers aren't found dead along the highways with their propensity to pick up hitchhikers. Maybe it's because: 1) most hitchhikers can't drive 18-wheelers; and/or 2) most folks know truck drivers are packed and know how to use it.
Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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You know, Sal:
It is really amazing that more truck drivers aren't found dead along the highways with their propensity to pick up hitchhikers. Maybe it's because: 1) most hitchhikers can't drive 18-wheelers; and/or 2) most folks know truck drivers are packed and know how to use it.
Jan
Comment Written 30-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2021
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I know! Thanks for checking me out. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I nearly missed this! My Birthday yesterday and all week has been manic (in a lovely way) by friends and long distance relatives driving down to see me.) If I hadn't seen your latest post pop up in my messages I'd not have gone looking for this one! Brain dead!
I really enjoyed this part, (owe you a six) the clues were spot on in the truck, and it looks like our missing man has some new clothes! Those poor honeymooners! But what a tale to tell the grandchildren!! Lol.
At least coming in late, it's not so long to wait for the next part. Well done, my friend. Another wonderful part to this riviting mystery! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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I nearly missed this! My Birthday yesterday and all week has been manic (in a lovely way) by friends and long distance relatives driving down to see me.) If I hadn't seen your latest post pop up in my messages I'd not have gone looking for this one! Brain dead!
I really enjoyed this part, (owe you a six) the clues were spot on in the truck, and it looks like our missing man has some new clothes! Those poor honeymooners! But what a tale to tell the grandchildren!! Lol.
At least coming in late, it's not so long to wait for the next part. Well done, my friend. Another wonderful part to this riviting mystery! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind commemts. No worries, my birthday is this Sunday and I know how exciting a birthday can be even at my age. My family makes me feel so loved. I will be posting and watching for you. Can't miss Rapier's demise! Sending along my very best and birthday hugs and kisses. 29?
Sal XOs...
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74 😭 I've only got thirty years left to reach my goal age! lol. xxx
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I refuse to believe that! You?re so pretty!!
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, that's a great line, rob a clothesline or go shopping. You've made great use of your setting again, and this plays out at a pace that I can picture it all.
Superb job of this, Sally. The Blind Girl seems to know her stuff, and a police/guide dog makes it that much more interesting.
A most enjoyable read today. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Ha, that's a great line, rob a clothesline or go shopping. You've made great use of your setting again, and this plays out at a pace that I can picture it all.
Superb job of this, Sally. The Blind Girl seems to know her stuff, and a police/guide dog makes it that much more interesting.
A most enjoyable read today. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the superb review and shower of stars! Seeing stars here! I am blessed from head to toe. So glad you like!
Blessings always, dear Gloria,
Sal XOs
Comment from Bill Schott
People come so close to a killer in weird ordeals and are still alive. Harrowing to imagine. Looks like the evidence is mounting and leading the good guys to the bad guys. Love the chase.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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People come so close to a killer in weird ordeals and are still alive. Harrowing to imagine. Looks like the evidence is mounting and leading the good guys to the bad guys. Love the chase.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and star blast, dear Bill. Both are greatly appreciated. I?m delighted that you are enjoying this book. Sending along my very best,
Sal XOs
Comment from Cindy Warren
I think Tony the Tiger is almost done for. The next chapter should be a good one. I don't see him going down without a fight. But I imagine him choking on his frosted flakes. He can't win.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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I think Tony the Tiger is almost done for. The next chapter should be a good one. I don't see him going down without a fight. But I imagine him choking on his frosted flakes. He can't win.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous compliments, dear Cindy. There?s a lot going on and going down. Stay tuned.
Sal XOs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Sounds like the story is getting deeper and deeper into a nasty crime scene. Was the newly married couple involved or not? Kind of thought they might be, as they were found near the crime scene. We'll find out in the next chapter I'm sure.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Sounds like the story is getting deeper and deeper into a nasty crime scene. Was the newly married couple involved or not? Kind of thought they might be, as they were found near the crime scene. We'll find out in the next chapter I'm sure.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the super great review and generous compliments. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from poetwatch
More information, Sally, and I love it as the pieces come together. :) The make of the fugitive with the tattoo will be the big give-a-way in also capturing Analiese. I don't recall the painting being stolen. I guess I have to backtrack your story. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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More information, Sally, and I love it as the pieces come together. :) The make of the fugitive with the tattoo will be the big give-a-way in also capturing Analiese. I don't recall the painting being stolen. I guess I have to backtrack your story. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and for staying current with me. My chapters are long and contain a lot. So glad to have you, dear poet. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from WalkerMan
This is another fine chapter, Sal, as it answers readers' questions about the connection between Analiese and Tony Alfanzi as well as provides a lot of useful evidence about the murders of the two men found in sunken car. Clearly, your knowledge of CSI procedures lends credence to this part of the story.
I Section One, we learn that Analiese and Tony were once married, and he still calls her when he wants something. We also learn that Andre's oil painting was stolen almost immediately after the buyer from the auction locked it in his safe, thus triggering an FBI investigation.
Section Two, about the crime scene investigation of the car is entirely plausible in both actions and related dialog, lending credence to the account. The unexpected appearance of the young couple adds more evidence to the record. They were probably saved by not seeing Tony stealing their clothes.
In Section Three, Dwayne Cooper is apologetic about the boots, but they washed clean easily with just water. His willing answers to all questions provided a lot more evidence, including his tattoo, which will help to identify him when found.
In Section Four, fingerprint evidence in Dwayne's truck also will help, as will finding the likely murder weapon under the passenger seat. Calling for a SWAT Team from New Orleans is a wise choice.
Thus, you build the suspense even higher. Superb, and aptly illustrated.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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This is another fine chapter, Sal, as it answers readers' questions about the connection between Analiese and Tony Alfanzi as well as provides a lot of useful evidence about the murders of the two men found in sunken car. Clearly, your knowledge of CSI procedures lends credence to this part of the story.
I Section One, we learn that Analiese and Tony were once married, and he still calls her when he wants something. We also learn that Andre's oil painting was stolen almost immediately after the buyer from the auction locked it in his safe, thus triggering an FBI investigation.
Section Two, about the crime scene investigation of the car is entirely plausible in both actions and related dialog, lending credence to the account. The unexpected appearance of the young couple adds more evidence to the record. They were probably saved by not seeing Tony stealing their clothes.
In Section Three, Dwayne Cooper is apologetic about the boots, but they washed clean easily with just water. His willing answers to all questions provided a lot more evidence, including his tattoo, which will help to identify him when found.
In Section Four, fingerprint evidence in Dwayne's truck also will help, as will finding the likely murder weapon under the passenger seat. Calling for a SWAT Team from New Orleans is a wise choice.
Thus, you build the suspense even higher. Superb, and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2021
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Dear Mike,
Thank you for the superb review and six shiny stars! Your kind reviews always mean so much. I?m delighted you enjoyed this exciting chapter. I?m having a lot of fun with this book and the array of characters. Hang on!
Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sal :))
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You are most welcome, Sal. Yes, despite my local distractions, I will. :)) -- Mike
