"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Fourteen Minutes"Is the living really alive and living?
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant fact here Ricky and it is amazing that there were so many new burns. You just need to adjust this line:
"3.6 million babies (were) born in the United States."
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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A poignant fact here Ricky and it is amazing that there were so many new burns. You just need to adjust this line:
"3.6 million babies (were) born in the United States."
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2021
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This is in the preliminary stage and was not supposed to be released Dolly that's why there was an edit and grammerical problem
Ricky
PS; I will finish it today I didn't have time the other day I wanted to get a post in but I didn't mean for it to be sent
Comment from Kailey Krider
I didn't I didn't know where you were coming from so I gave you a three point stars but babies are born everyday. I really don't know how many are born but I just know that they're born
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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I didn't I didn't know where you were coming from so I gave you a three point stars but babies are born everyday. I really don't know how many are born but I just know that they're born
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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This is not completed yet I started it and I didn't present it I don't know how it got out on the site?
Doctor Ricky 1024