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Help My Unbelief

Essence Poem

33 total reviews 
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
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Even the demon fled in front of Jesus. Many times I also cried out, Lord, I believe; help my unbelief! But like you said, Faith helps our unbelief through the Word of God. Thanks for sharing, Kit.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Kit,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by Kit Nongkhlaw on 02-Aug-2021
    Thank you and stay blessed, Kit
Comment from Begin Again
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Good day, Portia

How wonderful to remind the reader that regardless if things appear to be rocky and not what you imagined, offering ourselves freely to the Lord and having faith that in his time, we will be lifted from our fears.

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Carol,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Hugs...Portia
Comment from mbagby23
Exceptional
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God knows what we need when we need something. Encouragement is what I need I my life right now. Stopping by to read your poem just gave me the Encouragement of more faith

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021


    Thanks so much for this outstanding review, six-star rating, and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from E. Denison
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Encouraging essence poem here, Pharp. The content is something that will definitely appeal to many readers on this site, and your paired imagery is striking and provides the whole entry with a feeling of the power of faith through dark times. Thank you for sharing, best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Beejay
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In just two lines you've been able to convey what life means. My words to you don t seem enough.beautiful evocative images...
Well done and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Beejay,

    Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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Faith is the understanding, deep down within, that things will turn out all right for us no matter what the situation might be. You have expressed it very well in two lines. Well done! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Seshadri,

    Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia

Comment from Senyai
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Hi Portia,

Good to hear from you!

This is a dandy two line essence poem that meets all the rules of end and internal rhyming as well as six syllables a line - very difficult to make sense out of those rules, lol.

Very well done with a perfect message to realize faith is the cure for unbelief ... always. Very well said.

Excellent entry, Portia. Good luck in the contest.

Always,
Senyai

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Senyai,

    I am sorry for the delay in responding.

    Your reviews and very kind comments always bless me. Thanks so much for the best wishes.

    I pray you are doing well and keeping safe.

    Blessings...Portia
reply by Senyai on 02-Aug-2021
    :-)
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a terrific two line poem with a wonderful message. In times of trouble you can turn to God, he will help even those whose beliefs waver. Well done, best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments, and best wishes; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Frank Jauregui
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Great two line poem! Faith comes by hearing and hearing from the word of God, sometimes it helps to read God's word aloud. As I read your poem it just seemed to echo in me what I have found to be true so many times in my life; God's word increases indeed and boy does it bring relief! Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Frank,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Essence Poem
Help My Unbelief
by pharp

Hello, I like your spiritual poem. I love the presentation. The rhymes do not seem forced. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2021

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2021
    Gypsy.

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments; they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia