Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Essence Poem contest entry speaks vividly the truth about God for as per Psalm it speaks the truth that God is close to the broken-hearted; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

Have a wonderful day.

Blessings...

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with your essence poem with the well placed internal and end rhymes. I love the Scriptural truth of the first line. Best wishes in the contest!
Grammar comment:
faith confirm spoken goals (confirms)

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review, comments, and best wishes,

Have a wonderful day...