Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

A truly splendid little poem Val. The images are vibrant and compelling and the feeling is one of joy in the beauties of nature. I really enjoyed it. Congratulations on placing second in this contest. MM

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021

Thank you for the lovely review and congratulations. The butterflies in Southern California have been absolutely enchanting this year. All i want to do is write about them. LOL

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Wow, that butterfly would be interesting to see. Butterflies always make me a little happier.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021

Thank you for the review. It took second in the contest

reply by dragonpoet on 13-Sep-2021

You're welcome. Congrats
Joan

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

"Congratulations on placing in the 15 syllable poem contest. Your clever use of the words "butterfly" and "vibrations' provides the imagery of movement in the air. Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Thank you for the lovely review and congratulations

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Good Morning, Val!
Isn't that the truth? How I love to observe butterflies, birds, and bees hovering over my gardens in the early morning hours. "Good vibrations," indeed!
And congratulations on your winning 15 syllable entry! Much enjoyed!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Thank and congratulations to you, also. It was a lovely entry with a fabulous presentation. Here in California the butterflies have been very inspirational. Magical actually.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Congratulations on gaining a contest placing with this well executed offering. It's simplicity of effective words summons up a delightful image of how the sight of a fluttering butterfly can enhance one's day.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021

Thank you for the review and the congratulations.

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

Yes, butterflies do have good vibrations. There are so many different kinds, sizes and colors and there is something serene about the way they float along as if they have no cares and all the time in the world. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you for the lovely review. I am keeping my fingers crossed on this one.

reply by Mary Shifman on 07-Sep-2021

You are welcome

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Butterflies are such great subjects for poems. "Good vibrations" is such a perfect last line, butterflies do bring forth good vibrations. Excellent little poem that creates good feelings and a scene of nature.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you do much for reading and liking my little poem

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes a special, fleeting moment captured eloquently in this short format of just fifteen syllables - such fleeting moments can be so significant - a lovely pic to illustrate

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2021

Thank you for reviewing

Comment from Versch

Excellent

I love the beautiful picture of the butterfly that accompanies this poem. Butterflies always delight me whenever they are in my garden, pollenating the plants. Perfect syllable counts for the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021

Thank you for the lovely review

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I liked this piece. It has good, strong imagery and a univeral scene.

The last line made me smile and now I've got the Beach Boys song stuck in my head... lol

Best of luck to you
GMG

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2021

Glad you liked my little poem Love the Beach Boys. Thank you