Horizon's Edge
Septolet Poem8 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
Your words describing the scene of twilight and day coming to an end are as pretty as the picture you chose to go along with your poem. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
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Your words describing the scene of twilight and day coming to an end are as pretty as the picture you chose to go along with your poem. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 20-Jul-2021
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Gorgeous scenery. The night skies bring out the golden hues in the picture. What a sunset. Looks like the water's reflections are perhaps from the setting sunset, too.
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Gorgeous scenery. The night skies bring out the golden hues in the picture. What a sunset. Looks like the water's reflections are perhaps from the setting sunset, too.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
Comment from Wendy G
What a lovely image, and you your accompanying poem reflects that. It is a serene and beautiful moment in time, captured by your words, for the reader to enjoy. Good wishes for the contest.
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What a lovely image, and you your accompanying poem reflects that. It is a serene and beautiful moment in time, captured by your words, for the reader to enjoy. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Twilight
brightness
fills the sky
Summer sun
at
Horizon's edge
Time for day's end."
You did a great job on this poem. Your words are an apt description of the picture you have chosen. Twilight is such a special time of day.
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"Twilight
brightness
fills the sky
Summer sun
at
Horizon's edge
Time for day's end."
You did a great job on this poem. Your words are an apt description of the picture you have chosen. Twilight is such a special time of day.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
Comment from RodG
Your septolet describes a sunset vividly in only fourteen words. You start with a panorama shot of the coloring sky, then zoom in on the sun dropping below the "Horizon's edge." Indeed daytime is ending. Rod
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Your septolet describes a sunset vividly in only fourteen words. You start with a panorama shot of the coloring sky, then zoom in on the sun dropping below the "Horizon's edge." Indeed daytime is ending. Rod
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
Comment from Natalie Finch
Loved the pairing of photograph and poem. So hard writing the piece you want under competition requirements, but I think you did a good job in painting a vivid picture with your language and imagery.
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Loved the pairing of photograph and poem. So hard writing the piece you want under competition requirements, but I think you did a good job in painting a vivid picture with your language and imagery.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A nice poem. Simple language for a relaxing feel. Follows the rules for the contest well. Good word flow. Pleasant read. The picture fits well with the concept of the poem.
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A nice poem. Simple language for a relaxing feel. Follows the rules for the contest well. Good word flow. Pleasant read. The picture fits well with the concept of the poem.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-A good topic and
effective imagery
linking the two parts
of the poem very well.
-The brightness of
the twilight becomes
the "time for day's end."
-A good entry; good luck.
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-A good topic and
effective imagery
linking the two parts
of the poem very well.
-The brightness of
the twilight becomes
the "time for day's end."
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
