blissful little queen
a romantic poem4 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
Yes, this is so totally sweet. I could picture you picking those
flowers and giving the bashfully to your love.
You did a great job with this entry.
Lots of luck always.
Marie
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Yes, this is so totally sweet. I could picture you picking those
flowers and giving the bashfully to your love.
You did a great job with this entry.
Lots of luck always.
Marie
Comment Written 19-Jul-2021
Comment from JennStar
Loved this sweet and light romance poem. The last stanza is my favorite
Sunrises to sunsets
and the regal days between,
I feel royal, loved and loyal,
your blissful little queen.
The only thing I am not sure on is some of the punctuation just because it would feel stronger at some points to do something besides commas to indicate more of a pause/break. This is probably just a personal preference thing on my part.
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Loved this sweet and light romance poem. The last stanza is my favorite
Sunrises to sunsets
and the regal days between,
I feel royal, loved and loyal,
your blissful little queen.
The only thing I am not sure on is some of the punctuation just because it would feel stronger at some points to do something besides commas to indicate more of a pause/break. This is probably just a personal preference thing on my part.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
Comment from Natalie Finch
Excellent rhythm and rhyme; it flows very nicely. I thought it was worded in an original way (poetry can start to blur together and this stood out). I hope you do well in the contest!
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Excellent rhythm and rhyme; it flows very nicely. I thought it was worded in an original way (poetry can start to blur together and this stood out). I hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2021
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful flow and rhyme in your very romantic poem, it is the little but continuous things that count the most, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Wonderful flow and rhyme in your very romantic poem, it is the little but continuous things that count the most, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jul-2021
