Poems from a Pensive Poet
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Summer Memories Etched In Time"Verses from my heart
30 total reviews
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Congratulations!! I voted for this poem in the contest without knowing the author because it is so wonderful to remember those times etched in our memories. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem without the letter 'A', Kit.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Congratulations!! I voted for this poem in the contest without knowing the author because it is so wonderful to remember those times etched in our memories. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem without the letter 'A', Kit.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2021
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Thank you Kit, I really appreciate the review and your vote. I'm so glad you liked my poem.
Beth
Comment from lyenochka
Such a lovely and nostalgic poem! Yes, summer and Christmas are just not as fun as adults than when we were kids. "The wonder world is gone" but we still cherish the memories. Congratulations on the win!!
I guess it was an anonymous contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Such a lovely and nostalgic poem! Yes, summer and Christmas are just not as fun as adults than when we were kids. "The wonder world is gone" but we still cherish the memories. Congratulations on the win!!
I guess it was an anonymous contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
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Thank you for reviewing this. It was an anomymous contest. I seem to do better on those.
Comment from Laurie Holding
This is just perfect! I love your photo that accompanies this charming summer memory. I read it out loud the second time to enjoy your meter. Really well done, and you have my vote today.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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This is just perfect! I love your photo that accompanies this charming summer memory. I read it out loud the second time to enjoy your meter. Really well done, and you have my vote today.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for the review, the comments and the vote. People like you pushed me over the top so I won. I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
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Yay! Congrats!
Comment from pharp
Mystery Poet,
Outstanding!
This is a beautifully penned poem; you did an exceptional job writing this poem for this Life Without the Letter A writing prompt.
I tried writing a poem without using the letter A and found it difficult for me; you made it look easy.
Excellent rhyming throughout, a very smooth flow, and a most enjoyable read, Thanks for sharing the very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Mystery Poet,
Outstanding!
This is a beautifully penned poem; you did an exceptional job writing this poem for this Life Without the Letter A writing prompt.
I tried writing a poem without using the letter A and found it difficult for me; you made it look easy.
Excellent rhyming throughout, a very smooth flow, and a most enjoyable read, Thanks for sharing the very best to you in the contest.
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank ;you so much for the review, the great comment and the beautiful stars. I'll tell you how to make it easy. Write a poem without thinking about "A's" Then go back and cross out the words with A and substitute something that means almost the same. It worked for me. I did win so I can sign my name.
Beth
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Congratulations on your win, well deserved, my friend. I will definitely try your suggestion.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Chrissy710
What - gre-t poem h- h- very well written good rhyme plus nice meter
Good luck in the contest should do well I enjoyed this one it brought me some nice memories
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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What - gre-t poem h- h- very well written good rhyme plus nice meter
Good luck in the contest should do well I enjoyed this one it brought me some nice memories
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. You almost avoided the word a but the first word What has one LOL. I do appreciate it.
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Ha ha Didnt see Th-t one i trued lol good luck
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Ha ha Didnt see Th-t one i trued lol good luck
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Ha ha Didnt see Th-t one i trued lol good luck
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Ha ha Didnt see Th-t one i trued lol good luck
Comment from Chrissy710
What - gre-t poem h- h- very well written good rhyme plus nice meter
Good luck in the contest should do well I enjoyed this one it brought me some nice memories
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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What - gre-t poem h- h- very well written good rhyme plus nice meter
Good luck in the contest should do well I enjoyed this one it brought me some nice memories
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Chrissy, I don't know how you managed to review this poem twice but If FanStory lets it stand it gives me twenty-six which is the magic number to get a best status. Almost as good as winning. LOL Thanks.
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Well lets see I hope you win
Cheers Chris snd get 26 too
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Congratulations to you poet for writing eight lovely verses all about growing up and summer times, free and easy doing what kids do best. Enjoying themselves! I didn't see the letter A anywhere!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Congratulations to you poet for writing eight lovely verses all about growing up and summer times, free and easy doing what kids do best. Enjoying themselves! I didn't see the letter A anywhere!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate the review and the nice comments, and I am very grateful to you for awarding me six stars.
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading your childhood memories. Vivid imagery throughout.
Writing a poem without the letter "A" is quite an accomplishment and you did an excellent job with it.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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I enjoyed reading your childhood memories. Vivid imagery throughout.
Writing a poem without the letter "A" is quite an accomplishment and you did an excellent job with it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much Janet. I rally appreciate your review and comments.
:-)
Comment from Cat Merto
Nicely worded poem without using the letter A
Remember the summer as a kid, being a kid and the fun you, we all had
Its just not the same as we grew up
Photo and color theme perfect harmony for your poem Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Nicely worded poem without using the letter A
Remember the summer as a kid, being a kid and the fun you, we all had
Its just not the same as we grew up
Photo and color theme perfect harmony for your poem Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments. I had fun with it. :-)
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Your welcome
Comment from pookietoo
Excellent poem. I really enjoyed reading this poem about your memories. Keep up the great work on your poems. Good luck in this contest. Keep smiling.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Excellent poem. I really enjoyed reading this poem about your memories. Keep up the great work on your poems. Good luck in this contest. Keep smiling.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much for the revew and comments and expecially for the six stars.
:-)
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You're welcome.