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Life Without the Letter A contest entry

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Comment from pharp
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Mystery Poet,

You did an outstanding job writing this poem for this Life Without the Letter A writing prompt. I love the artwork chosen, I was smiling throughout the read.

I tried writing a poem without using the letter A and found it difficult for me; you made it look easy.

Excellent rhyming throughout, a very smooth flow, and a most enjoyable read, Thanks for sharing the very best to you in the contest.

Blessings...Portia

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Portia. Yeah, it's a bit tricky writing something without being able to use A. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind words. I'm glad you liked my silly little offering. Have yourself a great night.

    =]

    Ron
Comment from pookietoo
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Good poem. Good imagination. I enjoyed reading this poem. Good luck in this contest. Keep up the great work. Best wishes to you. Keep smiling. :) :) :)

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Pookie. I really appreciate the generous stars for this silly piece. Have yourself a fantastic night.
reply by pookietoo on 22-Jul-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Brenda Henderson
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Excellent. I paid close attention to your verse. I perused each word, line and paragraph searching in vain for the illusive and missing letter "A." It was great fun! Your poem is indeed exemplary. Good luck in the contest. I believe you have a definite contender here. Well done!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Brenda. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece.
reply by Brenda Henderson on 18-Jul-2021
    You're Welcome!
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Sorry, but I wrote something just like this!

Oh, but that was for one of the first contests I entered on FanStory, so all of eleven years ago!

I like that you managed to get good flow and rhyme and maintain natural language while fulfilling the restrictive prompt.

Good luck in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
    Lol. Yeah, I think I've covered almost all the contests this way. Sometimes I just can't resist. Haha. I really appreciate the great review, stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha, I clearly understand the mocking tone of your contest entry. The picture is a great choice to pair with your fun words. Great job without using the letter a as required. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and a fun message. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Jan. Yeah, I just had to use this picture when I came across it while searching. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful night.