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Larger Than Life

Witty Epitaph Contest Entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from LisaMay
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I love how irreverent this is. How did they get the lid down on his coffin?
I reckon this entry will win - poking fun with a hard-on. Aside from his sexual capers, I bet in his private life Bill was an erect member of society.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
    Lol I was going to try to create a pic like that, where the lid wasn't all the way shut. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Erect member of society. HAHAHA
reply by LisaMay on 19-Jul-2021
    Congratulations on your win, Ron.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2021
    Thank you, Lisa.

    =]
Comment from kiwisteveh
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A Limerick is always good for a sly giggle and the pun in the last line does it for me.

I would probably have either 'But' or 'Yet' at the start of line 4 - not both...

Good luck in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Steve. I took out the 'yet' and played with it here and there. Yes, we all love those limericks. Lol
Comment from Susan Newell
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Very clever limerick with just a touch of naughtiness. I think you have met the rules for the contest and succeeded at including humor. I was going to enter something in the same vein, but missed the deadline.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Susan. I really appreciate the generous stars. I wish you wouldn't have missed it. I'm sure it would have been hilarious. Have yourself a wonderful night and thank you again.
reply by Susan Newell on 18-Jul-2021
    You are welcome.