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seize the moment

no a-letter 5-7-5 poem (while our history)

3 total reviews 
Comment from Rashanna Popoola
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I feel that this was well written and l loved the image as well.Keep it going because time is valuable, also this is an awesome way of viewing history and time.Wonderful work and Great Job Writer.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Rashanna,
    Thanks for your first peek or review of my short poem style. Longer ones are not in my poetry wheelhouse.

    Pleased you liked my overall presentation for this contest entry.
Comment from equestrik
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Yes! Absolutely seize every moment for that is all we truly have. I like this write with the well chosen picture. Well done and I wish you all the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2021
    Thanks for your support for my carpe diem post. Pleased you liked its overall presentation.
Comment from Kailey Krider
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I didn't quite get what you were talking about in ur poem. Maybe talking about somthing we cn understand. But I thought it was okay. Like the effort that you put into the poem.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2021
    KK,

    My intent was to say that mistakes that may have been made in the past may indeed color our future actions, but we have the power to change the same going forward.