Shed MoreTearsFairytales@Fables
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Fatso and Skinny"Children Stories from the Heart.
2 total reviews
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Doctor Ricky 1024:
I have reason to believe these stories are often not so wonderful memories from your childhood. Some of us have a lot more of these than others - even if we were not the ones who actually suffered from them. For sure, our kids would benefit from better role models and more time in church. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Doctor Ricky 1024:
I have reason to believe these stories are often not so wonderful memories from your childhood. Some of us have a lot more of these than others - even if we were not the ones who actually suffered from them. For sure, our kids would benefit from better role models and more time in church. Thanks for sharing.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Thanks for reviewing and sharing your thoughts.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from AliMom
Ricky, my friend, you've got a lot going on in here. You drift in and out of your story right smack in the middle of your tale. Might be a better idea to put that introductory stuff at the beginning. I did like "fanstorian hands". That was cute.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Ricky, my friend, you've got a lot going on in here. You drift in and out of your story right smack in the middle of your tale. Might be a better idea to put that introductory stuff at the beginning. I did like "fanstorian hands". That was cute.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Well obviously this is the first one you've ever reviewed of my fairy tales and that's exactly the way they all are it's interrupted after it starts and then the narrator kicks in just part of the book and there's four of them.
Thanks for reviewing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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It is. I like your style - laid back, chatty. I'll check the others so I can get a handle on it.
