Comment from JennStar

Good

I liked this sweet and light poem the only problem I am having is with the last two lines. I don't know why but the flow seems to stutter here. It feels almost like it is the wrong ending that doesn't fit the rest of the poem.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021

Thanks for your review and comments.

Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw

Excellent

Excellent!!! If music be the food of Love, play on. Play on the music of this love song. Let it continue endlessly. That is what love is all about. The words and the rhymes amaze me. You are so talented to pen this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing, Kit.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.

reply by Kit Nongkhlaw on 17-Jul-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is precisely what I imagine this prompt creator had in mind. The poem rolls along to a spirited and unusual nine syllable a line rhythm on a romantic theme.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your rating and review.

Comment from Empress Adama Suso

Good

I feel the emotions in the poems, you've put alot of thinking in how you feel but I also believe you should consider the outdoor work, yea the love in the poem can be felt by a poet who recites but for a person who reads for fun, it doesn't capture my heart, honestly it's a very good poem you just have to improve a bit

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021

Thanks so much for your review and comments.