The Return
100 words5 total reviews
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Ominous! However, there is evidence in scripture that the restoration of a desolate earth to Paradise will occur very soon.
I find the info on www.jw.org.
Thank you for sharing
All the best for the contest
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Ominous! However, there is evidence in scripture that the restoration of a desolate earth to Paradise will occur very soon.
I find the info on www.jw.org.
Thank you for sharing
All the best for the contest
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thanks for your review. This desolate earth may be going to Paradise but apparently it's still not good enough for alien life.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very funny Sad, but funny. Our old earth has been around for millions of years. They keep telling us that we are ruining our earth. I don't know if that's true or not. I believe that God isn't going to let our world perish while we still need it. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Very funny Sad, but funny. Our old earth has been around for millions of years. They keep telling us that we are ruining our earth. I don't know if that's true or not. I believe that God isn't going to let our world perish while we still need it. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 15-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thanks for your review. Whether we're ruining earth or not the alien seem to think so.
Comment from MAMONIA
Interesting. I am trying to figure out who or what you are...a planet, the moon, the sun? I'm lost at the last line. I'm not holding my antenna. I am sure that was an important clue that I missed.
Earth hasn't done the best job in preparing the future for our children. With climate change and disasters happening all around the globe, we should definitely be concerned.
Wish you would tell me who you are holding the antenna.
Best of luck in the contest. This is a great entry.
Marie
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Interesting. I am trying to figure out who or what you are...a planet, the moon, the sun? I'm lost at the last line. I'm not holding my antenna. I am sure that was an important clue that I missed.
Earth hasn't done the best job in preparing the future for our children. With climate change and disasters happening all around the globe, we should definitely be concerned.
Wish you would tell me who you are holding the antenna.
Best of luck in the contest. This is a great entry.
Marie
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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I was seeing him as an alien visitor to Earth. Like humans sometimes say "I wouldn't hold my breath" he wouldn't hold his Allen antenne
Comment from humpwhistle
Don't you just love the irony. The only was we can keep our planet from alien infestation is to make it uninhabitable. Aren't we clever?
An interesting 100-word story. Best of luck at the polls. Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Don't you just love the irony. The only was we can keep our planet from alien infestation is to make it uninhabitable. Aren't we clever?
An interesting 100-word story. Best of luck at the polls. Peace, Lee
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Thanks very much for your review
Comment from blondie560
Cute ending. Kind of a Wall-E-esque story. Is your character an alien or a human whose family escaped the demise of earth hundreds of years ago? Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Cute ending. Kind of a Wall-E-esque story. Is your character an alien or a human whose family escaped the demise of earth hundreds of years ago? Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Thanks for your review. With him having an antenne I'm guessing my guy is an alien, otherwise humankind will go through a huge transformation in the future.