Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

The allusion in this story will either draw the reader in or repulse them. Once again, we see another case where
the Kool-Aid is doled out to even the young.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2021

Yes, I know you are correct about this little story having pluses and minuses, but it was something I felt compelled to write. So let the chips fall where they may, I know cliche. Thanks for the read and comment.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-word story, Robin Was Wrong, has the proper word count and suggests that people are getting the wrong message. Distribution of wealth is being replaced by -- "Mine!"

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021

Thanks for the read and the review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Nice job with this little piece. Spot on with the word count, too.

Mind you, I wouldn't recommend the Robin Hood lifestyle to the kids either. Stealing is still unlawful regardless of the reasons. Although, the US is predicated on Capitalism - that's the essence of the American Dream (TM).

So mother, I will not be some goody, - Mother should probably be capitalised here.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021

Thanks for the catch, the read and the review. Appreciated.