Be thankful for your blessings
Always be thankful for what you have7 total reviews
Comment from pookietoo
Thank you. Yes we are truly blessed. We have a lot of blessings to be thankful for in this life. Keep up the great work. I wish you a lot of luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Thank you. Yes we are truly blessed. We have a lot of blessings to be thankful for in this life. Keep up the great work. I wish you a lot of luck in this contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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You are welcome.
Comment from MAMONIA
Especially today, after the Pandemic, we should be happy to have a roof over our heads. So many people have lost their homes and we are overrun by homeless people all over the world.
It is good to be grateful, and let the world know that you are happy and content to be in a wonderful place.
Good use of the prompt words.
Best of luck,
Marie
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Especially today, after the Pandemic, we should be happy to have a roof over our heads. So many people have lost their homes and we are overrun by homeless people all over the world.
It is good to be grateful, and let the world know that you are happy and content to be in a wonderful place.
Good use of the prompt words.
Best of luck,
Marie
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can relate to your words here and I am thankful for my happy life everyday as I enjoy all the things you mention here. Having a safe haven and family are everything to me, much enjoyed, and you used all those words for the contest, a magical write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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I can relate to your words here and I am thankful for my happy life everyday as I enjoy all the things you mention here. Having a safe haven and family are everything to me, much enjoyed, and you used all those words for the contest, a magical write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Thank you
Comment from equestrik
This is a good write using the required words for the contest. It is cautioning us to be grateful and appreciative of our lives and that is truly the key to happiness. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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This is a good write using the required words for the contest. It is cautioning us to be grateful and appreciative of our lives and that is truly the key to happiness. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Pantygynt
This poem of thanks for our blessings uses all the required words in the course of its six lines of free verse style poetry. The last line reminds us of those who are not similarly blessed.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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This poem of thanks for our blessings uses all the required words in the course of its six lines of free verse style poetry. The last line reminds us of those who are not similarly blessed.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You make excellent points and, I notice that you rhyme the lines, which makes it nicer to read. My family is not so happy with me, but they wouldn't let me starve or go homeless.
I like the title and the line above it...although it seems like you ran out of room.
But, that's okay...I get the point most definitely. Thank you for bringing this issue to the foreground. We need to help solve the serious issue of homelessness in our country.
Have a safe, warm, and comfy life,
Jesse
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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You make excellent points and, I notice that you rhyme the lines, which makes it nicer to read. My family is not so happy with me, but they wouldn't let me starve or go homeless.
I like the title and the line above it...although it seems like you ran out of room.
But, that's okay...I get the point most definitely. Thank you for bringing this issue to the foreground. We need to help solve the serious issue of homelessness in our country.
Have a safe, warm, and comfy life,
Jesse
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
Good luck with the contest!
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Eternal Muse
A good social commentary. People who have the comfort of home may not understand the agony and misery of being homeless.
Great imagery and visuals.
You have a few nits:
1st - the description. You have:
"Homeless people doesnâ??t know what itâ??s like to have a safe h"
I guess, you ran out of space the the word "heaven" only had an "h". A description part would only allow you certain number of words.
Also, you have spelling errors and weird symbols there.
Suggestion:
Homeless people don't know the meaning of safe haven.
You have:
What a comfort it is to have a safe haven a place that we call home.
You need a comma after "haven" before "a place"
What a comfort it is to have a safe haven, a place that we call home.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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A good social commentary. People who have the comfort of home may not understand the agony and misery of being homeless.
Great imagery and visuals.
You have a few nits:
1st - the description. You have:
"Homeless people doesnâ??t know what itâ??s like to have a safe h"
I guess, you ran out of space the the word "heaven" only had an "h". A description part would only allow you certain number of words.
Also, you have spelling errors and weird symbols there.
Suggestion:
Homeless people don't know the meaning of safe haven.
You have:
What a comfort it is to have a safe haven a place that we call home.
You need a comma after "haven" before "a place"
What a comfort it is to have a safe haven, a place that we call home.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you
