Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

Lovely presentation. Contest compliant.
An encouraging theme
Thank you for sharing
Thanks for reminding us to be positive
Yes, there is hope and we can focus on that.
For more encouragement I have found guidance on a fantastic all free website
www.jw.org. Best wishes for the contest

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

This is a very sweet poem that made me smile. The syllable count is on point! Great job! I love all of your work! Thank you so much for sharing ð???ð???ð???ð???

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021

Thank you for this exceptional review. :)

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is lovely and I enjoyed reading it. It flows nicely and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. I really like your last sentence and you followed the contest rules. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021

Thank you, I really appreciate this great review. :)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This uses the tetractys form to extol the idea of keeping positive whatever the situation in the the hope that such optimism will be born out by ultimate success.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021

Thanks for reading my poem and for understanding what it's about. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

When you reach rock bottom, the only way is up and we all deserve to rise up and enjoy life, it is there to enjoy and we all need to grab it before it illusively is gone forever, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021

Thank you for such a nice review. :)

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This is a wonderful and a very uplifting poem. It brings you in a better mood with its lightheartedness and the cheerful presentation.

Loved the imagery, visuals and the gorgeous artwork.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021

Thank you for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

When I first clicked on here, my first thoughts were " oh, isn't this cute!" I really enjoyed your Tetractys entry for this contest. Nicely done. This should do well.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021

Thanks so much, it's my first try at this form of poetry. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)