Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

You did a great job. Keep up the great work. This poem is very enjoyable. Good luck in the contest. :-) :-) Great rhyming job.
Good luck again. :-) :-)

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

Thank you!

reply by pookietoo on 16-Jul-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from MAMONIA

Excellent

This is cute and funny. Never expected an entry for the contest like this.
You certainly get a chuckle from me with that pic and those words.
You did an excellent write for the contest using all the words needed.
I wish you lots of luck.
Marie

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021

Thank you, Marie!

Comment from Cogitator

Excellent

Other than the fact that it would be difficult to check into any hotel/motel at age sixteen, hormones will indeed ruin many lives. You got lucky...Just John

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021

Thanks for the review!

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a cute write fir the contest. You used the words well and you chose a good picture to go with your writing. This was fun and funny. All the best to you.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021

Thanks for the review!