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cover charge

a 50 word story

3 total reviews 
Comment from pookietoo
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Good job keep up the great work this is only a good story. Good luck in the contest. best wishes always. :-) :-):-) :-) Good luck in all you do :-) :-)

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
    thanks for the review
Comment from lancellot
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Wow, that sounds like someone with a death wish. I used to know more than a few people who would have taken your friend's head and whoever was with him. Young people do tend to live on the edge.

Interesting story.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the review. He was pretty tough so I doubt the honey mooning couple from New Jersey would refuse the cover, haha.
    Back in the day the Caribbean club was a biker bar, no glass in the windows, live bands etc ....and a spectacular view of Keys sunset every night.
    Have a nice Sunday, cheers, j
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Spot on at 50 words. Very amusing--more so that this is true! Devious doings, masterfully divulged in this delightful tidbit. Love to hear more on Captain Bob!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
    Haha, it was worth the $5.00 cover just to be in his orbit. He was a Viking~like guy from California that used to ride with Hell's Angels and was running a charter boat from Key Largo to the Bahamas. I was first mate and cook for 3 years with him, then we came up north to Vermont and built my cabin.
    I have written a few pieces about our life, one with a pic of us on the sail boat. He always wore Hawaiian shirts and Bahamas straw hat. He died of cancer a few years ago.