Gun Slinger
A very angry man11 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
I guess that 8-shooter didn't cut the fabric, author. Now, I know the west was wild, and people shot whom they please, especially if the man had a big old star on his chest, but really, that man was outgunned. Why if he had a 9-shooter or 12-shooter the wife would be sleeping around. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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I guess that 8-shooter didn't cut the fabric, author. Now, I know the west was wild, and people shot whom they please, especially if the man had a big old star on his chest, but really, that man was outgunned. Why if he had a 9-shooter or 12-shooter the wife would be sleeping around. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from AliMom
I've heard this joke before. It's still hilarious. Your choice of artwork is perfect. It conveys intensity and dark intentions. I'm not sure if the 'Me Too' generation would appreciate it but I find it hilarious.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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I've heard this joke before. It's still hilarious. Your choice of artwork is perfect. It conveys intensity and dark intentions. I'm not sure if the 'Me Too' generation would appreciate it but I find it hilarious.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the great revue
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You're welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't know why I'm not sent some of your posts. I'm guessing they were entered in contests or something. Anyway, thanks for the laugh and I'm sorry I missed it. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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I don't know why I'm not sent some of your posts. I'm guessing they were entered in contests or something. Anyway, thanks for the laugh and I'm sorry I missed it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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You don't see most of my posts because I enter a lot of competitions that are voted for by the FS members and the authors must remain annonymous until after the voting. This one is coming first at the moment, it will probably win. Glad it made you laugh. Jen. X
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And I don't enter or pay much attention to the contests. Maybe I should start, so I won't miss so much good writing.:-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is hilarious! Very inventive and you made me smile here. An ideal entry for the contest and you won my vote, a funny post, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Ha ha ha, this is hilarious! Very inventive and you made me smile here. An ideal entry for the contest and you won my vote, a funny post, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Thanks Dolly for thd great review and stars. So glad I made you laugh. X
Comment from pookietoo
Very good job enjoy reading the poem I bet you enjoy guns. Keep up the great work. Good luck in this contest. Keep a smile on your face. :-) :-) :-) :-)
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Very good job enjoy reading the poem I bet you enjoy guns. Keep up the great work. Good luck in this contest. Keep a smile on your face. :-) :-) :-) :-)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from equestrik
That is so very funny. Yes, he will definitely need more ammo. You have presented a good entry for the writing prompt. Well done and thank you for the chuckles!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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That is so very funny. Yes, he will definitely need more ammo. You have presented a good entry for the writing prompt. Well done and thank you for the chuckles!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from LisaMay
This is definitely funny, I laughed out loud, but I also pity the poor husband for having his wife's unfaithfulness so publicly exposed. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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This is definitely funny, I laughed out loud, but I also pity the poor husband for having his wife's unfaithfulness so publicly exposed. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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So glad this made you laugh. Thanks
Comment from mermaids
Sounds like many individuals are sleeping with this man's wife. You have written a humorous tale that makes the reader laugh. Your story flows smoothly and best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Sounds like many individuals are sleeping with this man's wife. You have written a humorous tale that makes the reader laugh. Your story flows smoothly and best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your image and entry pair nicely. Your words flow smoothly. The dialogue is good, too. I've heard/seen this story on the internet.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Your image and entry pair nicely. Your words flow smoothly. The dialogue is good, too. I've heard/seen this story on the internet.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Many thanks for reviewing
Comment from Pantygynt
I had a distinct feeling of deja vu on reading this, though I cannot be certain where it came from. It is still a good joke - the old ones are indeed the best,
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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I had a distinct feeling of deja vu on reading this, though I cannot be certain where it came from. It is still a good joke - the old ones are indeed the best,
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Many thanks.
