"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "The Shame of My Pain"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
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Comment from Jarvis Popovich
Nice comparison of shame to a unwanted lover, who is coherencing you to go with her. Scary and mysterious to imagine. It's not your fault, comes to mind as would say anyone reading this. It's a nice piece helping with to see the struggle. Thanks for sharing again!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Nice comparison of shame to a unwanted lover, who is coherencing you to go with her. Scary and mysterious to imagine. It's not your fault, comes to mind as would say anyone reading this. It's a nice piece helping with to see the struggle. Thanks for sharing again!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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I tend to use my writings and journalings to help with my past pains.
I think it's the reviews I get back the most.
People seem to understand especially writers
Thanks Jarvis.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from mermaids
Great analogy of pain as a woman who comes to you. There is an eery feeling in your words and emotions come forth. Excellent use of words and a smooth flow of rhyming words.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Great analogy of pain as a woman who comes to you. There is an eery feeling in your words and emotions come forth. Excellent use of words and a smooth flow of rhyming words.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thanks Elaine always appreciate your wonderful thoughts and reviews.
Doctor Ricky 1024