Animal Antics and Interactions
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Perils of a Pet Owner, Part 3"Animal that inspire me to record their stories.
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Comment from Judy Lawless
I love reading about all of your pets, Beth. The variety of breeds and personalities made a great story. This sentence gave me a big chuckle: "She spent her riding time snapping at dust mites, lit up by sunlight." Great job.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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I love reading about all of your pets, Beth. The variety of breeds and personalities made a great story. This sentence gave me a big chuckle: "She spent her riding time snapping at dust mites, lit up by sunlight." Great job.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Than you, Judy. I so liked reading about my dogs. The dust mite thing was something that surprised me. I had to look close to see what she was so busy snapped at.
Beth
Comment from Pantygynt
Your life seems to be surrounded by animals. This is a most entertaining animal story but I think we had an extra one work him/herself into the final paragraph. I had got used to to Mitsy in n the previous paragraph when Misty made a surprise appearance in the final one.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Your life seems to be surrounded by animals. This is a most entertaining animal story but I think we had an extra one work him/herself into the final paragraph. I had got used to to Mitsy in n the previous paragraph when Misty made a surprise appearance in the final one.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the review and nice comment. I glad ;you found it entertaining. I really appareciate your noticing the misspelling of Mitsy's name. I'm fingers seem to have a mind of ther own when it comes to transposing letters.
Beth
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Mine too as often as not. Lol.
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes, our Tiki acted the same way. She was scared of thunder and harsh weather. Her so-called bravery got her killed by a Rockwaller. You handle the nose bite better than I would have.
Nothing wrong with this write. Getting to know you better.LOL.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Yes, our Tiki acted the same way. She was scared of thunder and harsh weather. Her so-called bravery got her killed by a Rockwaller. You handle the nose bite better than I would have.
Nothing wrong with this write. Getting to know you better.LOL.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Thank you Chuck, I appreciate the review. I hope what you're learning about me, doesn't make me appear too much of nut case. LOL
Beth
Comment from Brenda Henderson
A very interesting narrative. I can see why you would entitle the series; "Perils of Pet Owner." I don't know what your plans are for these stories but I can envision some definite possibilities. This might make a nice live action or animated series on Animal Planet. I would further suggest that you either develop a smoother transition between the stories about each subsequent pet or separate the stories as a type of diary or anthology series. The way they are presented here feels a little disjointed. If you were to combine these stories/entries into a book you may wish to dedicate a different chapter to each pet. You might also consider doing a series of articles for a blog or magazine like "Cat Fancy." The possibilities here are quite numerous. If you have any skill at drawing you might even consider a comic strip. Thank You for sharing this. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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A very interesting narrative. I can see why you would entitle the series; "Perils of Pet Owner." I don't know what your plans are for these stories but I can envision some definite possibilities. This might make a nice live action or animated series on Animal Planet. I would further suggest that you either develop a smoother transition between the stories about each subsequent pet or separate the stories as a type of diary or anthology series. The way they are presented here feels a little disjointed. If you were to combine these stories/entries into a book you may wish to dedicate a different chapter to each pet. You might also consider doing a series of articles for a blog or magazine like "Cat Fancy." The possibilities here are quite numerous. If you have any skill at drawing you might even consider a comic strip. Thank You for sharing this. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the review and the comments and suggestions. You brought up some things I hadn't considered, but they are very good ideas. I was a art major but i've never thougt of doing a comic strip.
I really appreciate the six stars.
Beth
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You're very welcome!
Comment from MAMONIA
Although I am not much of an dog person, but I do enjoy these stories that you write. Sometimes we find exceptional favorites and have fun with them. It is too sad when they die and difficult to replace.
You've done an excellent job of coping with these animals and bringing them up, along with your children.
Another enjoyable read. Thanks.
Marie
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Although I am not much of an dog person, but I do enjoy these stories that you write. Sometimes we find exceptional favorites and have fun with them. It is too sad when they die and difficult to replace.
You've done an excellent job of coping with these animals and bringing them up, along with your children.
Another enjoyable read. Thanks.
Marie
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Thank you Marie. I really appreciate the review and comments. I'm so glad you enjoy my stories.
Beth
