"The Book of Death"
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Comment from Theodore McDowell
Hello DR!!!!! Good to see another piece from you. I love the title of this poem. It is the best line in the poem. the piece reads like a biblical psalm, a lament for God to come and rescue you with his presence.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Hello DR!!!!! Good to see another piece from you. I love the title of this poem. It is the best line in the poem. the piece reads like a biblical psalm, a lament for God to come and rescue you with his presence.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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I believe the key to what you're going to write will start in the beginning with the title.
The key will open the door and the door will be immense if he can find the right title!
Thanks for your time and review!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment from Jarvis Popovich
Deep once again.
It's obvious the pain in this poem, and is felt and I understand. Partly I can't fully understand the writers pain, but can now understand through this poem. It's a plea for help, relief and going home.
I wish you the best and I'd say that you are loved and He is listening :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Deep once again.
It's obvious the pain in this poem, and is felt and I understand. Partly I can't fully understand the writers pain, but can now understand through this poem. It's a plea for help, relief and going home.
I wish you the best and I'd say that you are loved and He is listening :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thanks for your time and wonderful review.
Doctor Ricky 1024