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Comment from angel123
Your poem is an interesting mix of reality and fantasy that takes us on a journey of your vivid imagination. Your title is also interesting and your artwork goes well with your emotional poem that expresses your thoughts in an entertaining way. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Your poem is an interesting mix of reality and fantasy that takes us on a journey of your vivid imagination. Your title is also interesting and your artwork goes well with your emotional poem that expresses your thoughts in an entertaining way. Best wishes!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2021
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Thank you Angel 1 2 3 for your wonderful thoughts and for your time and review!
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Comment from Jill McCauslin
This is an ambitious undertaking! I really like the poem. I also really like the artwork that you selected to go with the poem. In the second to last line, did you mean to use the word sight instead of "set your site?" This was a lot of fun. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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This is an ambitious undertaking! I really like the poem. I also really like the artwork that you selected to go with the poem. In the second to last line, did you mean to use the word sight instead of "set your site?" This was a lot of fun. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thanks Jill and I spiced it up a little bit just for you!
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